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Davy Jones Locker

Beware young lad, tis the dawning of thy demise, For the water witches screams, are carried on the Winds breath, of the tidal waves hurricane. Be-she, the banshie of the fathom’s abyss, treacherous Mistress, beguiling temptress, enslavement's captive, Whom belongs to the sailors devil himself, Thus she announces her masters arrival, Known is he, as Davy Jones. Aquatic demon, the soul feast-er, appearing perched Upon the four masted sailing vessel, a seething fiend, With ivory white fangs, red piercing eyes flash against The storms rage. The predator to prey ratio, delights this beast, from hell's Deepest pit, it's relishing laughter, does chill the mariner, To their very bones within. Atop his ghoulish head, arises bullish horns, to drive The undead, beneath the seas watery realm. Fly swiftly, all seafaring men aboard, for the dark wrack's Shadow, mars thy voyage, for death's imitate sacrifice. Crimson gloves, do hold a set of golden keys, to chains Shackled locks, behold phantom wave stalkers. Lost souls of the forgotten, servitude’s salves of the Murky bottoms depths. Treasures locker keeper, within the heart of the sea, Does lie, a cold guardian stands watch, over it's Precious contents, bound forever as persecution's Divine punishment, from Poseidon, the great Lord of the seven seas. Answering their captain's hailing, the soulless crew, Climbs aboard his ghostly craft, heading ever upwards, To the unknown beyond. Accursed windjammers, cutting against the rough surf, Emerging as a seaweed covered derelict, it charges forth, Riding upon the edge of the ultimate storm. At fates spinning wheel, Davy Jones hands are set steadfast, Awaiting the newly undead, to join his brackish crew. The living pray for mercy grace, salvation's angels Save us, pleading on knees bent low, Oh Lord Almighty, Hear the sailors voices, crying out in sheer terror. But the devil dues must be paid, for other Mariner’s safe passage. To night behold the tolls collection plate is passed, And is served by evils blackest hand, nay it's filled Not in gold, but instead ti's flesh to the living bone. Served on a silver platter, to none other then Davy Jones himself, listen to his echoing laughter, Filling the chilled air's darkness, Than plunging beneath the briny depth's below. Nothing remains but a legend's myth or so It is said. BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/10/2014 9:00:00 PM
Cheryl, This write blew me away, my friend! Amazing!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 2/26/2014 8:24:00 PM
I loved your version and the way you told of the legend of Davy Jones. The rich descriptions that you always use in your poetry makes it so much more enjoyable for reader, because it causes us to get caught up in the story. A truly wonderful write, Cheri!
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Date: 2/26/2014 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this great free verse. Joyce
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Date: 2/25/2014 9:28:00 AM
Loved this poem, the wording was fantastic! Congratulations on the win!... And I have a fish named Davy Jones...
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:52:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win. enjoyed the fine metrical composition,cherl
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:14:00 AM
Cherl, , congratulations on your wonderful win - SKAT
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Date: 2/25/2014 3:09:00 AM
- Contest judged: 2/24/2014 - Impress me - V (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio A.V. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Pleased to read your poem, Cherl. - nice to join :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/14/2014 1:21:00 PM
I want to plunge beneath the sea, and find me a treasure... Better, yet I'd love to meet, Mr Jones.. Will he collect my soul, or will I collect his.. hehhehe. Cheryl, well done imagery, I hear them sailor voices loud and clear... Happy Valentines Day... Linda
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Date: 2/12/2014 5:16:00 PM
WOW , I enjoyed this one. I love the sea you hit a home run with this one Cheri!!
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Date: 2/12/2014 8:37:00 AM
I love the sea but I'm a terrible sailor. I get sea sick watching Hornblower on telly but I loved this fascinating read.
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:45:00 AM
an amazing write Cheri you seem to have some sailing knowledge which adds to this lovely inspiring pen Hugs
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Date: 2/11/2014 1:53:00 PM
cherl dunn, THIS POEM, FOR ME, AS AN EX-SAILOR, "WAS TONS OF FUN"!!!... Tho', I have a few observations: in your first line, "...ti’s the dawning of thy demise,", should not the "ti's be 'tis (contraction of 'it is')?// The line, "Shadow, mares thy voyage, for death's imitate sacrifice", should it not read, "...mars...death's intimate sacrifice"? "Filling the chilled airs darkness,", would not "air's" (belonging to air) serve more appropriately? Last line, "Than"-better, "Then"?xoxo//Sinclair
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Date: 2/11/2014 1:47:00 AM
Riveting write Cheryl! I love the irony on the first line -dawning of thy demise. I also love the vivid imagery created of Davy Jones - he who is devil like in character. And what you said about devil dues - the element of sacrifice are what legends are made of. Very well penned!
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