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Daughter

Daughter. Mother's true treasure and bundle of joy, Father's pride,strength and tender coconut, A prolonged fragrance of lotus thats coy, Reflections she has of parents clearcut, Princess of pure heart,no chance of alloy Well! Character from her genes she employs. Rhyme scheme-AB,AB,AA.10 syllables in each line. Contest:A rhyme in 60. Sponsor:Laura Loo 28/1/2017.

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Date: 2/3/2017 7:21:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts Rizwana.
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Date: 2/3/2017 3:33:00 AM
Thank you....regards
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Date: 2/2/2017 6:51:00 PM
well done! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 2/2/2017 12:25:00 PM
Lovely words for a lovely daughter.congarats
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Date: 2/2/2017 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations Rizwana...
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Date: 2/1/2017 8:58:00 PM
Loved it! So true too. of course she's PERFECT. I've said it myself for than once in my life, I'll admit
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 2/3/2017 3:36:00 AM
Thank you... Regards
Date: 2/1/2017 3:54:00 PM
Hi Rizwana, congratulations on your win. Very nicely done!
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Date: 2/1/2017 2:09:00 PM
Enchanting, Rizwana. Congratualtions on your 1st. Place. // Barry
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Date: 2/1/2017 1:24:00 PM
A beautiful princess indeed! Congrats, Rizwana!
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 2/3/2017 3:33:00 AM
Thank you....It's my pleasure to be a part of your contest.....regards
Date: 2/1/2017 12:07:00 PM
just beautiful Rizwana :) Reminds me of mu precious little girl...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 2/3/2017 3:35:00 AM
Thank you...It's my pleasure to be a part of your contest.... Regards

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