Daughter

Daughter

Your face mirrors mine,
As mine does my mothers.

Your smile is a smirk
That  quickly explodes
Into sublime lightness.

Your skin has a blush
As does plums true wine,
When young men turn their heads
And whisper your name to each other.

Your hair casts a curtain
Over your face . It acts as a veil to
Guard your thoughts and hide your moods.
It falls long and silky to your waist, 
and parts in a sliver,to allow one eye to spy.

If I could love you more
It would surely be like a violent death,
For I would faint, become breathless,
And my heart would burst forth from my breast

My life has been in free fall since your birth.
A never ending plunge into bottomless depths,
Fearing for your wellness and happiness.

I live only to hear you call my name
Hopefully with joy, and not with tears.

On that face that mirrors mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Tacito Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 5:21 AM
"If I could love you more, it would surely be like a violent death." <--- This. A huge declaration of a mother's love.
Wayne Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 7:22 AM
I like the book ends of the structure of this poem. It was very unique and overpowering! All mothers should love this way.
Guzzi Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 3:48 PM
Oh my hope she doesn't know she has such power over you hon? I absolutely love this verse "If I could love you more It would surely be like a violent death, For I would faint, become breathless, And my heart would burst forth from my breast" Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 7:14 PM
you are unstoppable, bren... how warm! :) hugggs, nette
Falotico Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 3:19 PM
Very sweet and tender and warm write... enjoyed
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 2:40 PM
Brenda. I don't know if I have seen much of your poetry yet, but this one is outstanding. A Fave!
Atry Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 2:45 PM
Thanks Andrea. Its easy to write from truth,
Vunk Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 2:04 PM
i really think that you are very artistic and have a way with words
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