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I finally talked you into a date I cant believe I arrived too late You wouldn't open the door Wont see me any more Next time Ill drive not roller skate

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Jean Bush

Date: 10/16/2018 11:21:00 AM

Was it a date to go skating? Too bad, she could have fallen for you. Hahaha!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/16/2018 4:44:00 PM

:) Very clever! Thanks Jean

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/15/2018 6:10:00 PM

G'day Timothy … gee whiz Timothy, there wouldn't be a next time for me. What an inconsiderate woman - thanks Mate Lindsay

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/15/2018 8:02:00 PM

You are right Lindsay!

William Woods

Date: 10/11/2018 5:51:00 AM

Ha! Love a good Limerick. Thank You

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/11/2018 6:33:00 PM

Me too! Thanks William

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/6/2018 8:43:00 PM

I'm picturing you in different ages - not a happy ending in any scenario, Timothy! Better luck next time.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/6/2018 11:02:00 PM

I wish I knew then what I know now, timing is everything. Im sure you've been grand at all ages.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/4/2018 3:57:00 AM

I cant believe a girl would turn down a man on roller skates. Her loss.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/4/2018 2:49:00 PM

That's what I was thinking :)