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Darkest of Confessions Voices in my head Dancing abreast with the abstract Shattered glasses and shattered dreams History repeats many a lovers’ defeat I demand a duel With my heart I welcome the sword that shall draw first blood Ending the torment of duel nationalities Kissing lovers and slaying love The ménage a trois of all duels The sword, the heart, the opera of nothings Graveyards hold the court, from dusk to dark Lovers return Some are loved Some are slayed Regrets in my diary of misery Hold me true I shall sing of you In my darkest confessions As my sword pieces your heart You can bleed in tranquility With your last breath It’s I Mademoiselle de Maupin That laid you to eternal rest Julie d'Aubigny 1670Aprox–1707, better known as Mademoiselle Maupin or La Maupin, was a 17th-century swordswoman and opera singer. Her tumultuous career and flamboyant life were the subject of gossip and colourful stories in her own time, and inspired numerous portrayals afterwards

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Date: 9/22/2016 6:03:00 AM
wow, very interesting, i was hooked on the poem and then the story opened up another world, curiuos and cool.
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Date: 9/17/2016 1:54:00 AM
Wonderful depiction of a decorated lady. Wonderful Sir Arthur.
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Date: 9/13/2016 10:47:00 PM
great write really enjoyed both poem and music.....Seren
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Date: 9/13/2016 2:40:00 PM
love the write, Arthur, "demand a duel With my heart " I do feel like that would help some of my emotions to separate from things that I would be better off with. Hugs sweet friend
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Date: 9/13/2016 12:25:00 PM
what a riveting write, arthur.. and i am slain, ohh... who could julie be?.. i'm dense today. lol..huggs
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Date: 9/13/2016 7:03:00 AM
Hello Arthur, A superbly crafted poem in every respect. I really like this one. SEVEN/FAV!! Cheer and Best, Gary (P.S. Be sure, if you haven't already, to check out a poem posted this last Sunday by me under the title: "The Old Dark House." It's another three-way co-write by Liam McDade, Anne-Lise Andresen, and me. It received recently "POTW." I mention your name near the end of my Author's Notes, with a brief expression from the "Brother's and Sister Grimm." You gave us that name.) Best, Gary
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