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Darkened Doorways

Darkened Doorways He’d walked this trail in dreams before sniffed hungrily at each locked door across the country shore to shore from rocky coasts to mountains core felt the populations sigh huddling in fear of breaking dawns their children used as rulers pawns white crosses dotting barren lawns while grieving mothers slowly die. Although he saw the sadness grow he walked no faster, nor more slow for it was not his job to know which way the fatal wind might blow just march in flowing cape of black cast his shadow on their fate unmindful of their time or date or those who stand alone and wait nor count the ones not coming back. For he alone with sharpened scythe carries his darkness through the light that cries to those in spirits fright in tunnel visions final sight dimming the light of then and now erasing all that might have been forgiving all of final sin that death will someday lose, not win death’s scythe and cape take final bow. for Isaiah Zerbst - The Lady of Shalott – Poetry contest 9/9/2014

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Date: 9/15/2014 9:04:00 AM
A truly magnificent write.... Congrats on your win!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/15/2014 12:55:00 PM
Thanks Robert for your comment and for taking the time to read my work.
Date: 9/15/2014 7:48:00 AM
John, I enjoyed reading this so much I read it three times so I could savour it again and again. I was captivated by this amazing poem. Congratulations on your great win.
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John Lawless
Date: 9/15/2014 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Brenda, it is gratifying to know that you read it more than once. I think that is the ultimate compliment for a poem and the poet.
Date: 9/15/2014 1:32:00 AM
Captivating and creative poem, congrats, John
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John Lawless
Date: 9/15/2014 12:51:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Mehta for you continued interest and comments
Date: 9/14/2014 9:57:00 PM
Such wonderful rhyme and flow. Good for you! congrats. BG
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John Lawless
Date: 9/15/2014 12:51:00 PM
You again!! Thanks so much Barbara for you continued support.
Date: 9/10/2014 9:14:00 AM
An intriguing, captivating write I much enjoyed! :-)
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John Lawless
Date: 9/15/2014 12:48:00 PM
Thanks Christine, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 9/10/2014 8:22:00 AM
Wow, and wow...this is awesome. BG
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John Lawless
Date: 9/15/2014 12:47:00 PM
Thanks Barbara my penchant for walking down the other side of the street takes me down some "different" poetic alleys

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