Darkened Doorways

Darkened Doorways


He’d walked this trail in dreams before
sniffed hungrily at each locked door
across the country shore to shore
from rocky coasts to mountains core
felt the populations sigh
huddling in fear of breaking dawns
their children used as rulers pawns
white crosses dotting barren lawns
while grieving mothers slowly die.

Although he saw the sadness grow
he walked no faster, nor more slow
for it was not his job to know
which way the fatal wind might blow
just march in flowing cape of black
cast his shadow on their fate
unmindful of their time or date
or those who stand alone and wait
nor count the ones not coming back.

For he alone with sharpened scythe
carries his darkness through the light
that cries to those in spirits fright
in tunnel visions final sight
dimming the light of then and now
erasing all that might have been
forgiving all of final sin
that death will someday lose, not win
death’s scythe and cape take final bow.


for Isaiah Zerbst - The Lady of Shalott – Poetry contest
9/9/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 9:04 AM
A truly magnificent write.... Congrats on your win!
Lawless Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Thanks Robert for your comment and for taking the time to read my work.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 7:48 AM
John, I enjoyed reading this so much I read it three times so I could savour it again and again. I was captivated by this amazing poem. Congratulations on your great win.
Lawless Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 12:53 PM
Thank you Brenda, it is gratifying to know that you read it more than once. I think that is the ultimate compliment for a poem and the poet.
Mehta Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 1:32 AM
Captivating and creative poem, congrats, John
Lawless Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 12:51 PM
Thank you Dr. Mehta for you continued interest and comments
Gorelick Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 9:57 PM
Such wonderful rhyme and flow. Good for you! congrats. BG
Lawless Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 12:51 PM
You again!! Thanks so much Barbara for you continued support.
Costello Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 9:14 AM
An intriguing, captivating write I much enjoyed! :-)
Lawless Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 12:48 PM
Thanks Christine, glad you enjoyed it.
Gorelick Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 8:22 AM
Wow, and wow...this is awesome. BG
Lawless Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 12:47 PM
Thanks Barbara my penchant for walking down the other side of the street takes me down some "different" poetic alleys
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