Dark November

Dark Novembers

It’s the silence that is killing
this cold November chilling
Natures beauty with frost, stillness, color but no sound.
A wiser woman knows the inner temperature of the soul paints the
landscape to match their own
a fool discovers the surfeit of despair

This Thanksgiving day bleak, weak, sick, sad, still, quiet, reflective
I had not to give the love you sought so you walked out,
And the past knew you were to come…
And like a reverberation of the all the relationships I’ve known
 The past and to come will follow the ripples of that first stone,
I cannot love you in November I loved you all the months through
September, many decades upon each, watching entropy teach me the ways
to age…
I make no sound but inside screaming
Nature may be jesting in her seeming to mock whole
the lamentation of all the secret silent sorrows of each soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Zamalea Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 12:32 AM
Welcome! I must say you held me with each word and that scared me a hell! Your writing is indeed powerful! Keep on!
Salehi Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 2:26 AM
That's fine don't love me in November. Spring is coming and I will be waiting... Cheers
Macmillan Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Whew. Dark brew. "Watching entropy teach me the ways/ to age..." MINT. You know how to cut a line... methinks you are not so new to poetry. You write fearlessly.
Smith Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 2:55 PM
Really enjoyed this poem...more of a free verse than prose...I can feel your words and I do like your use of alliteration...well done and welcome
A  Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 11:24 PM
Toni, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do. ~SKAT LOVE~"
Kimathi Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 4:30 AM
Greetings Toni. I hope this is fiction.... Well, congrats for having your poem featured in the poetrysoup homepage! ;-)
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December 11, 2015 at 2:46 PM
Hi Toni, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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December 10, 2015 at 5:21 PM
Hi Toni, November's one of the worst months for me. Love the poem. WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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December 10, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Toni, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 9:27 AM
nice poem tony :) welcome to PS :))
Osho Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 4:41 AM
excellent first toni.
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