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There is an intense flame in the dark dimension. Have you ever wondered why it has burned so long? Is it the work of the devil or of evil? The flame has both healed and shattered our souls. As soon as you reach the twilight realm, Millions and a billion of endless eons. Two colossally strong creatures Place them in this hour's Faltine Inferno. Then it's time to acquire stuff back. It's a mighty show of strength! But at the cost of their master, Sinifer. Expel him and his sister, Umar. Our family banished Faltin's companions. We continue our journey through the dimensions. In the course of our quest, we have made discoveries. Into the world of shadows Dimensions within dimensions, dimensions of mystery We crave the Millennials to rest in peace. All the way to Faltin. The biggest purse in the world That's where I would fight. I would induce him to disappear as a flaming rocket! Step into the unknown. Find strength beyond the reach of emotion! A taste of the inner cosmic forces is true insight! because the dark realm feeds the mind's desire! Both fire and power are born. Faltin's homeland. Sad! The fire would shine infinitely brighter. If I could become Supreme so quickly! My faltine fire would burn until it reached EXTREME! the densest, bringing power beyond dreams. Evil is the ruler of many dimensions. The supreme being, the fiery Fartinius The one who takes your poor soul for payment The ruler of the abyss, the lord of pandemonium Ruler of the evil dimension Mormammu. I am Dormammu. because this man is still me.
Written: January 14, 2023 Dark Dimension Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Date: 1/20/2023 8:25:00 PM
Dimensions within Dimensions….. Dark realm feeds the mind’s desire…… My flatline power will burn…. Because this man ….. GREAT Congrats to win.
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Date: 1/20/2023 6:00:00 PM
Great stories of Faltine, Sinifer and Umar....all strange to me. But I know this is an extremely profound poem on the forces of darkness. Congratulations on your great win, dear Lasaad....
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Date: 1/15/2023 6:16:00 AM
You journey through this dark dimension brilliantly my friend. Evil has many faces as you say, Lasaad.
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Date: 1/15/2023 1:29:00 AM
This is a very dark poem. But let it be known. The Light will win.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/16/2023 2:01:00 PM
Amen..' A truth to grasp.'

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