Dark Clouds

Dark clouds gather  pain 
 On  nights without slumber
 Hoping to find sleep 
  She closes her eyes to dream
  While lullabies in the distance gleam

nightsleepfree verse

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Paul Callus

October 4, 2017 at 2:21 PM

I like the contrast between the first and second part of the poem, Joseph; the end line wraps it up nicely. Regards // paul

Joseph May

October 4, 2017 at 2:34 PM

Thank you Paul

Andrea Dietrich

October 1, 2017 at 8:20 PM

I really like this short poem which somehow got past me!! Was it for someone's contest?

Joseph May

October 4, 2017 at 2:34 PM

Thank you Andrea

Joanna Daniel

September 24, 2017 at 12:01 PM

Wow, Joseph! Succinct and sweet:)

Joseph May

October 4, 2017 at 2:34 PM

Thank you Jo

Susan Ashley

September 24, 2017 at 9:07 AM

A beautiful write Joseph with a fabulous last line!

Joseph May

October 4, 2017 at 2:33 PM

Thank you Susan

Vijay Pandit

September 23, 2017 at 3:03 PM

Lovely!

Joseph May

September 23, 2017 at 4:32 PM

Thank you Vijay

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 23, 2017 at 2:56 PM

- Beautiful, Joseph - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

September 23, 2017 at 4:31 PM

Thank you Anne

Arthur Vaso

September 23, 2017 at 1:20 PM

Very beautiful Joseph! I loved that last line.

Joseph May

September 23, 2017 at 4:31 PM

Thank you Arthur

Heidi Sands

September 23, 2017 at 11:49 AM

Oh, I love this poem Joseph! A definite favorite to think about the lullabies at night :)

Joseph May

September 23, 2017 at 11:53 AM

Thank you Heidi..hugs

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