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Darkening

darkening clouds quick race to clothesline posted on June 3, 2018

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/4/2018 4:25:00 PM

A striking image, Line. Hope the hard work did not go to waste! That trickle in the creek seems to be telling us that rain would be welcomed! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2018 8:21:00 PM

Absolutely, Paul. Thank you for your wonderful visit and comment.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/4/2018 3:58:00 PM

I've heard of which you speak. But hear in So Cal dark clouds mean nothing. They're usually gone by noon. But like Michelle I love the smell of line-dried sheets.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2018 8:22:00 PM

Thank you, my poetic friend.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/4/2018 2:16:00 PM

I love the smell of clothes off the clothesline - great image of approaching rain-

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2018 8:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Michelle. Most appreciated.

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/4/2018 9:56:00 AM

That's why we have dryers lol...but I love your wet haiku...plus I like dark clouds lol...love and light...^WW^

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2018 10:40:00 AM

The joys of country living. Miss those days.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/4/2018 7:25:00 AM

Oh the perfect Haiku, so soon the creek will fill..awesome poetry, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2018 10:39:00 AM

Thank you so much, Harry, for your lovely visit and comment. Most appreciated.

Elaine George

Date: 6/4/2018 6:18:00 AM

A great Haiku, I did just that...yesterday. Elaine

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2018 10:40:00 AM

Lovely. Thanks for your visit and comment, Elaine.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/3/2018 10:08:00 PM

A sense of urgency is felt in your haiku, Line, of getting the laundry in just before the storm. A very visual and tactile poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2018 10:40:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Susan.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/3/2018 6:42:00 PM

don't you just love it when we get to gather the armload just before the rain fall, great 3 lines .

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2018 6:57:00 PM

The best ! Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Pixie.