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Dark Child

He sits at the bottom of the hole Above him he sees the needle of light Falling as it bottles him up. He is weak and weary Wants to stand up but cannot Wished to talk but he has no heart Yearns to see but has lost his sight. He wants to be seen To shake off the dust Fell clean again Rise up the bottle of light Find it again which burnt in the furnace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/16/2017 1:44:00 AM
This is very beautiful and deep write...Dear friend..
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Date: 11/2/2017 7:57:00 PM
This is great writing, Kudzai. I hope more people might see it and comment. One of your best with that imagery of the needle of light that bottles him up.
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