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Being strong is his only option Satisfaction is not always the fulfillment of what you want when you gets stuck in an unwanted situation Witch hunting and lynsjing He loses control and it makes him desperate The bitterness has taken over, as a development of a toxic virus Bile from the stomach leaves a bitter taste on the tongue His defense mechanisms are in constant preparedness It's about making choices and all choices have consequences A fear of losing his identity, total paranoia Thoughts like a spider web in destruction The water is polluted, rape of our world Twisted lines of madness ... nightmares, tears and flashbacks He does not know the rhythm of the music Brainstorm Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton ~ 4th place in the contest ~ 16.10.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/16/2018 10:02:00 AM

Gosh, a certain politician comes to mind when reading this. Excellent! Congratulations on your win and on having this featured! Happy Holidays my friend! : ) xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2018 12:26:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 12/16/2018 9:07:00 AM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on having your wonderful poem chosen as a Featured Poem this week, enjoy the honor ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2018 12:26:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 11/14/2018 9:51:00 AM

Great writing for you! So different!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2018 11:10:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly comment and visit, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/13/2018 2:44:00 PM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations on you win!! The notion of the "spider web" is very important indeed. A very creative and powerful verse for sure!! A FAVE TOO!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2018 11:10:00 AM

- Hi Gary, many thanks for your visit a fave and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/29/2018 1:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win and kind wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2018 1:51:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jordan Marks

Date: 10/26/2018 8:03:00 AM

This reads like a song! Congrats on your win!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2018 11:23:00 AM

- In that case a sad song - Many thanks for friendly comment and congratulations, Jordan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/26/2018 7:52:00 AM

Congrats on your win Anne..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2018 11:24:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debjani Mitra

Date: 10/26/2018 5:26:00 AM

I liked the metaphor of " spider web " ..very well-thought out ..the entire content. Congrats dear

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2018 5:31:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly comment and congratulations, Debjani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/25/2018 1:10:00 PM

Great write Anne-Lise, congrats on a fine placement in my contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2018 1:23:00 PM

- Many thanks for my 4th place in your contest, John ... nice to attend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/20/2018 1:54:00 PM

I think that we all know this guy; so how come he gets to run things? Twisted! Well penned though.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2018 2:40:00 PM

- Everything is twisted, M.L. ... he can not cope with it ... he is trapped - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/20/2018 7:45:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, a deep, powerful, creative write from your golden pen. I wish you all the best in the contest. I loved the content of this excellent work Anne-Lise. You used the form so well in this write. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX A Fave.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2018 2:48:00 PM

- It will not surprise anyone to know that this is one of the most common types of fear that people experience, Mike - Many thanks for your fave and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/19/2018 1:48:00 PM

Wow...you must know psychology well to be able to write this poem, Sunshine. These lines give us a peek into a disturbed mind. One wonders what brought on these thoughts in his mind. Intriguing piece. Thanks for your visit to my blog, dear. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2018 2:44:00 PM

Nice to see you, Eileen :) - Psychology is an interesting but sometimes difficult to understand theme - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/18/2018 7:37:00 PM

Very deep & emotional write Anne-Lise...superbly rendered my friend...love & light...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2018 2:40:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly comment and visit, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/18/2018 12:51:00 PM

Powerful write Anne..Best wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2018 1:07:00 PM

- Thanks for good wishes (I need it :) ... and your comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/18/2018 12:42:00 PM

Perhaps your great write is fiction but for me it nails our current commander in chief!! So well done!!! xx00

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2018 1:05:00 PM

- To me this is fiction, Mike ... but surely someone's "life" - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/17/2018 5:17:00 PM

Very deep thought provoking poem.Anne-Lise; I loved it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2018 1:44:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 10/17/2018 5:39:00 AM

Woah, this is an intelligent deep, thought provoking write... he does not know the rhythm of the music.... great last line... life can be difficult sometimes...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2018 11:18:00 AM

- S.O. many thanks for visiting & comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/17/2018 4:09:00 AM

Great stream of consciousness. There is one thing I might consider, maybe amend your poem slightly, if you do not mind me saying. You switch from 'one' to 'you' and to 'him'. Is this deliberate? Many kind wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2018 11:18:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting & comment, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Unfamiliar Flower

Date: 10/17/2018 2:10:00 AM

Loved it! He does know the rhythm of the music!! Being strong is his only option !! Good luck on the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2018 11:16:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting & comment, U.F. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/16/2018 4:28:00 PM

I feel in your words the plight of a troubled mind--well depicted poem, Anne-Lise. Best for a win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2018 11:16:00 AM

- Many thanks Vijay, for visiting & comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/16/2018 4:08:00 PM

Terrific entry Anne-Lise, he doesn’t know the rhythm of the music. Best wishes in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2018 11:16:00 AM

- Charlie, many thanks for visiting & comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/16/2018 3:30:00 PM

ohh, how biting are your images, brooding and stark, anne... just shows you can go from gentle , loving to desperate... greeat job and happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2018 11:15:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting & comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/16/2018 2:40:00 PM

Wow, this was dark and felt very lonely to me. A tortured mind is what I read and it has grabbed me. This was really good my friend. Best of luck in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2018 11:15:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting & comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)