Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Dark Brainstorm -

Being strong is his only option
Satisfaction is not always the fulfillment of what you want
when you gets stuck in an unwanted situation
Witch hunting and lynsjing
He loses control and it makes him desperate
The bitterness has taken over, as a development of a toxic virus
Bile from the stomach leaves a bitter taste on the tongue

His defense mechanisms are in constant preparedness
It's about making choices and all choices have consequences
A fear of losing his identity, total paranoia
Thoughts like a spider web in destruction
The water is polluted, rape of our world
Twisted lines of madness ...
nightmares, tears and flashbacks
He does not know the rhythm of the music







                                    Brainstorm Poetry Contest
                                  Sponsored by: John Hamilton
                                  ~  4th place in the contest ~




16.10.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Connie Marcum Wong December 16, 2018 at 10:02 AM Gosh, a certain politician comes to mind when reading this. Excellent! Congratulations on your win and on having this featured! Happy Holidays my friend! : ) xxoo Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2018 at 12:26 PM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France December 16, 2018 at 9:07 AM Anne-Lise, congratulations on having your wonderful poem chosen as a Featured Poem this week, enjoy the honor ~ Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2018 at 12:26 PM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter November 14, 2018 at 9:51 AM Great writing for you! So different! Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2018 at 11:10 AM - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman November 13, 2018 at 2:44 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations on you win!! The notion of the "spider web" is very important indeed. A very creative and powerful verse for sure!! A FAVE TOO!! Best Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2018 at 11:10 AM - Hi Gary, many thanks for your visit a fave and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann October 29, 2018 at 1:47 AM Congratulations on your win and kind wishes, Kai Anne-Lise Andresen October 29, 2018 at 1:51 AM - Thank you very much, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jordan Marks October 26, 2018 at 8:03 AM This reads like a song! Congrats on your win! Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2018 at 11:23 AM - In that case a sad song - Many thanks for friendly comment and congratulations, Jordan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May October 26, 2018 at 7:52 AM Congrats on your win Anne.. Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2018 at 11:24 AM - Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debjani Mitra October 26, 2018 at 5:26 AM I liked the metaphor of " spider web " ..very well-thought out ..the entire content. Congrats dear Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2018 at 5:31 AM - Many thanks for friendly comment and congratulations, Debjani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Hamilton October 25, 2018 at 1:10 PM Great write Anne-Lise, congrats on a fine placement in my contest! Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2018 at 1:23 PM - Many thanks for my 4th place in your contest, John ... nice to attend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser October 20, 2018 at 1:54 PM I think that we all know this guy; so how come he gets to run things? Twisted! Well penned though. Anne-Lise Andresen October 20, 2018 at 2:40 PM - Everything is twisted, M.L. ... he can not cope with it ... he is trapped - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven October 20, 2018 at 7:45 AM Hi Anne-Lise, a deep, powerful, creative write from your golden pen. I wish you all the best in the contest. I loved the content of this excellent work Anne-Lise. You used the form so well in this write. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX A Fave. Anne-Lise Andresen October 20, 2018 at 2:48 PM - It will not surprise anyone to know that this is one of the most common types of fear that people experience, Mike - Many thanks for your fave and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian October 19, 2018 at 1:48 PM Wow...you must know psychology well to be able to write this poem, Sunshine. These lines give us a peek into a disturbed mind. One wonders what brought on these thoughts in his mind. Intriguing piece. Thanks for your visit to my blog, dear. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen October 20, 2018 at 2:44 PM Nice to see you, Eileen :) - Psychology is an interesting but sometimes difficult to understand theme - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior October 18, 2018 at 7:37 PM Very deep & emotional write Anne-Lise...superbly rendered my friend...love & light...^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen October 20, 2018 at 2:40 PM - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May October 18, 2018 at 12:51 PM Powerful write Anne..Best wishes Anne-Lise Andresen October 18, 2018 at 1:07 PM - Thanks for good wishes (I need it :) ... and your comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile October 18, 2018 at 12:42 PM Perhaps your great write is fiction but for me it nails our current commander in chief!! So well done!!! xx00 Anne-Lise Andresen October 18, 2018 at 1:05 PM - To me this is fiction, Mike ... but surely someone's "life" - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi October 17, 2018 at 5:17 PM Very deep thought provoking poem.Anne-Lise; I loved it! Anne-Lise Andresen October 18, 2018 at 1:44 AM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One October 17, 2018 at 5:39 AM Woah, this is an intelligent deep, thought provoking write... he does not know the rhythm of the music.... great last line... life can be difficult sometimes... Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2018 at 11:18 AM - S.O. many thanks for visiting & comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann October 17, 2018 at 4:09 AM Great stream of consciousness. There is one thing I might consider, maybe amend your poem slightly, if you do not mind me saying. You switch from 'one' to 'you' and to 'him'. Is this deliberate? Many kind wishes, Kai Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2018 at 11:18 AM - Many thanks for visiting & comment, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Unfamiliar Flower October 17, 2018 at 2:10 AM Loved it! He does know the rhythm of the music!! Being strong is his only option !! Good luck on the contest Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2018 at 11:16 AM - Many thanks for visiting & comment, U.F. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit October 16, 2018 at 4:28 PM I feel in your words the plight of a troubled mind--well depicted poem, Anne-Lise. Best for a win. Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2018 at 11:16 AM - Many thanks Vijay, for visiting & comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith October 16, 2018 at 4:08 PM Terrific entry Anne-Lise, he doesn’t know the rhythm of the music. Best wishes in the contest Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2018 at 11:16 AM - Charlie, many thanks for visiting & comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud October 16, 2018 at 3:30 PM ohh, how biting are your images, brooding and stark, anne... just shows you can go from gentle , loving to desperate... greeat job and happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2018 at 11:15 AM - Many thanks for visiting & comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green October 16, 2018 at 2:40 PM Wow, this was dark and felt very lonely to me. A tortured mind is what I read and it has grabbed me. This was really good my friend. Best of luck in the contest Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2018 at 11:15 AM - Many thanks for visiting & comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)