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Dark Angel

Her radiance hidden from sight the Dark Angel stalks the night secret dark paths she follows her quiver full of poison arrows Searching for the evil hearts to tear apart sweethearts carry of the essence of soul leaving the other without console Flaming arrows of dark vengeance seek souls without giving temperance to a fiery dark hell she leads them there she chooses eternally to condemn Thus beware of the Dark Angel watch out with care for her Virgil least you be next on the list much better for you to be missed written 06/24/2013

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/8/2013 2:43:00 PM

Wonderful well done I really enjoyed this! Laura :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/8/2013 5:37:00 PM

ty Laura I like doing the odd dark poem ty for enjoying it Shadow x smiles

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/8/2013 5:36:00 PM

oops missed this somehow sorry Linda ty for reading Shadow x smiles

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/1/2013 6:18:00 PM

Shadow, you have such creativity for fantasy here. Love the title all the way through. You have captured a vision of dark angel perfectly:) Congrats on your win in the contest

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/3/2013 5:04:00 PM

hi Karen and ty congrats to you as well Shadow x smiles

John Posey

Date: 6/30/2013 4:59:00 PM

The fear of dark angels is not my concern - for I am assured I will not burn. - And when my time on earth here is o'er - I'm bound for my house on the other shore.-..... congrats, Shadow, on a great entry... Love ya dearly.... Jake

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/3/2013 5:05:00 PM

may you find peaceful bliss Jake sounds delightful Shadow x smiles

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:47:00 PM

Shadow, :-) Congratulations in the Rhyming contest. I'm enjoying all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/29/2013 5:13:00 PM

Skat you are so kind ty for congrats I will take a look at your blog Shadow x smiles

Adarsh Raj

Date: 6/25/2013 11:54:00 PM

smooth flower, well rhymed, loved it a lot....:):):):)Adarsh

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/26/2013 7:57:00 AM

Adarsh welcome to Soup ty for visiting my work and your nice comments Shadow x smiles

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2013 4:06:00 PM

Way to get yourself inspired and I have met the one who inspired this. I hope she gets to reads this!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2013 4:21:00 PM

hi Andrea ty for looking at my work Shadow x smiles many things inspire +)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/25/2013 10:37:00 AM

eerie and beautifully crafted, shadow... this mirrors the overall theme of darkness and sense of foreboding... incredible!..:) hugggs

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2013 2:36:00 PM

hi Nette ty so much for stopping in appreciated Shadow

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 6/25/2013 8:16:00 AM

A scary topic, written with a pleasing cadence and fine couplet rhyming. Well done Shadow!! Best wishes, Keith

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2013 2:37:00 PM

hi Keith scary indeed ty for reading Shadow x smiles

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2013 8:08:00 AM

It is poetry like this which is the reason you are doing so well in contests. Exceptional piece shadow.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2013 8:11:00 AM

wow Richard such high praise ty so much I am overwhelmed Shadow x smiles

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/25/2013 7:27:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2013 8:12:00 AM

ty Ravi so kind of you to take the time to read it Ty Shadow x smiles

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/25/2013 6:20:00 AM

Sinister and dark....Beautifully written, though! :) Thanks for your visit, Shadow...Glad to make the acquaintance....I sense there is a hopeless romantic residing in you as in me!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2013 8:14:00 AM

always Eileen and child like beliefs lol ty so much Shadow x smiles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2013 6:15:00 AM

Interesting lines that you have penned in this one..Creatively unique one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2013 8:15:00 AM

love your work Sara keeps me from the house chores lol Ty so much Shadow x smiles

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/24/2013 11:56:00 PM

Well written,,, my kind of dark story,,, like my grim reaper ;} thank you for liking my Pitch Perfect Dreams ;}

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2013 5:16:00 AM

hi Debbie it was lovely yes a dark write good to do a couple now and then ty for reading Shadow x smiles