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Dark and Dangerous Like a Secret

Among the phantom of hillsides and trees, She hovers quietly, fragrant as a ripened jasmine Beneath the stark new moonlight peeping Harsh to a disguised tryst, a forbidden desire As her lover appears near the appointed cave-- His musky whisper gasping across the sky, hushed To imbue love forbidden within those emerald eyes; O perilous enough to claim her... owned by another. Warm, warmer like one torrid August, they caress On a night's full steam, knowing in the darkness This rendezvous must be their last, final liaison-- For a thousand concealed ramblings spread Around a small locale: But quivers of hunger Render them untamed --fondling seeking waking The openness of an ovule and bold pistil... Till an old eagle owl shrieks while woman and man Endure the rise of morning's call--- unbridled. Free Verse Only- Pick a Theme Contest Sponsor: Laura Loo 6/8/2018

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Date: 6/16/2018 11:11:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, nette. Well penned.
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Date: 6/9/2018 1:54:00 PM
Nicely done...
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Date: 6/8/2018 10:42:00 AM
Nette, nicely done and well written verse with great imagery :) Congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/8/2018 9:02:00 AM
The dark and dangerous forbidden tryst...nicely written, Nette, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 6/8/2018 8:05:00 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:41:00 AM
so beautiful as always sweet Nette, you never cease to amaze me. thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/8/2018 5:59:00 AM
Oh you are so inspiring, with your wonderful imagery and poetry, always pure pleasure to read..
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Date: 6/7/2018 10:49:00 PM
From such a beautiful mind doth you paint on dreamer's canvas!
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Date: 6/7/2018 5:21:00 PM
A very romantic poem so full of intrigue You have the taste of an old master!
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Date: 6/7/2018 2:37:00 PM
- Beautiful ... fragrant, romantic and yes ... a little dangerous, Nette :) - (But I can keep a secret :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2018 2:07:00 PM
Lovely romantic verse could just picture it. You should put all your work into a book, its poetry at its best. Tom
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