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Dark and Dangerous Like a Secret

I'm sitting alone at a dance club bar. Sometimes a man approaches one of the tables, inviting the women there to join his own little group for drinks, laughs and conversation. And for whatever is to follow. . . One man sits alone at his own little table. His hair is jet black and greased back, except for some ebony locks falling loosely to the left side of his forehead, a few of them covering half his left eye. Despite (or because of?)his James Dean hooligan look, he is attractive; his face is dark and dangerous like a secret. Something flashes in my mind -his mouth pressed hard against mine, and we are alone in the moonless night. He looks up and notices me noticing him. Inwardly I groan. I’m interested, but how obvious can I be? He saunters toward me, but before I can hear what he is going to say, I wake up in the sweltering heat of my bedroom. The man in my dream has fled, and I lie there half-awake, my mind filled with shadows dark and dangerous like a secret. June 5, 2018

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Date: 2/15/2020 1:27:00 AM
Andrea, you should try getting an A/C in your bedroom, it might help you with these fever dreams, haha. Just kidding... great free verse and congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Quick tip: beware of picking up hooligans in bars!
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Date: 6/16/2018 11:07:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your podium finish, Andrea.
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Date: 6/12/2018 2:34:00 PM
Hi Andrea, please I need your help after all those years my being alone and depressive, suicide, but here I am back and I feel the need to your friend like before. I trying to write to feel alive. Thank you. As usual, your poems are the best, and so is your inner beauty. Love Terry xoxo
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/12/2018 5:15:00 PM
thanks , dear. I had wondered what happened with you. I sent you a soupmail. Hope you got it.
Date: 6/12/2018 12:47:00 PM
Very creative
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Date: 6/9/2018 12:02:00 AM
Like the song recorded by the Everly Brothers !!!! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/8/2018 8:38:00 AM
Don't you hate it when your dream just starts getting good and you wake up. Congrats on your win, Andrea.
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Date: 6/8/2018 8:07:00 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:47:00 AM
what a dream to have dear Andrea! great poem all around, thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/8/2018 5:36:00 AM
Although I expect it to be a fiction but it is still interesting that how in our dreams we are in a totally different place, doing things that we ll never in our real life, scientists can never explain how and why we see dreams. Coming to poem You have written it really beautifully, I enjoyed reading each and every single line of it, however it s disappointing that it was simply a dream and that person don t exist, good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/6/2018 6:52:00 PM
Well penned. Hot stuff, Andrea. This really looked like it was going somewhere. LOL
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Date: 6/6/2018 12:34:00 PM
Those are the kind of dreams that are tough to re-kindle, alas...
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Date: 6/5/2018 10:12:00 PM
Damn, why do we always wake up when we get to the good bit. Great write Andrea. Tom
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Date: 6/5/2018 5:42:00 PM
That is an interesting poem with the twist at the end. Good one Andrea. :)
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Date: 6/5/2018 5:20:00 PM
woohooohhh talk about sultry Ms Dietrich... shame it was just a dream!!! :-) hugs Jan xx
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