Dark

“Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before”
Edgar Allan Poe, The Raven.



I’m sitting on the cusp
of blazing silence,
watching thick
sullen clouds 
swerve in funeral pace,
as ruby reds within 
ravishing rainbows,
disappear into depths of
blue laced emptiness,
like silken fire rising from 
a diamond-furnace,
illustrating the venom
rushing through
my veins in vain. 
The sun always knew
of the pain I swirl to
amongst silhouettes
of burning stars. 


I am a mistress 
of darkness,
crowned beneath 
a fallen sky
sequined in 
sinful sapphires 
and amaranth angst.
Throned to a kingdom
that has no air 
for fragile flowers. 

I’ve faced cruel 
fangs of reality,
that fed my paranoia
with wistful peonies. 

There’s no ray of twilight
for the tormented tears,
I hide behind 
the shimmering
horizon, painted with
dandelion dreams in
dreary drowsiness. 

And I surrender at 
the edge of 
doom to an
agony of a pawn.
But there’s no 
running from a 
lethal kiss that kills,
like the queen’s gambit
that would freeze your 
soul into thickened vapors
of bleeding ice.

Yet the moon looked straight
through my soulless eyes, 
hoping I would taste 
an ounce of her truth.
If only facts would reveal
tiny seeds of grief that 
were sprouting steadily 
into what they
call "madness" 
maybe then they would 
have known, 
even black roses
bleed the same as red.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 11:00 PM
Ink, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the quote too, Constance
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:56 AM
Dear Kind Poetess, I am so happy and pleased to know that you enjoyed reading my poem and this is a top winner for you makes my day. Thank you so very much for the acknowledgment
Alex Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 9:07 PM
"even black roses bleed the same as red" - Great work. Congratulations!
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:55 AM
Thank you so very much
Poet Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 8:43 AM
Dear friend, Ink. I am thrilled to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved contest podium win. Your poetry is nothing short of breathtaking, leaving me in awe of your ability to articulate your thoughts with such precision and eloquence. All my best wishes to you.
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:55 AM
Dear Sotto, you are so generous and kind and congratulations to you too, and whenever you say “ Masterpiece “ it definitely already is a winner for me. Thank you
Fowler Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 7:16 AM
As a fan of Poe, I am in awe of how you have woven the darkness throughout. I enjoyed how the first stanza spiraled downward and drew me into the maelstrom. The last stanza is brilliant! :)
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:51 AM
Awwn i love Poe too, but I wasnt thinkin of Poe when i wrote this, but poes quote definitely seemed fitting. I thank you and i hope to read more of your work truly u are such a supportive soul
Hind Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 3:10 PM
You have a really amazing gift. I cannot believe how gifted you are. I have no more words to say...
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:50 AM
Aawn you are so sweet thank u kind poetess
Dutta Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Exploring Darkness, sinking in depth. Marvellous introspection. You own the skill to express your thoughts i precise way. Best wishes for contest.
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:49 AM
Thank you kind soul For your best wishes , forever grateful
One Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 7:53 AM
Such a medley of darkness... You did justice to the theme of Poe here... Its like an insight into how you feel and how your minds can be at times.... The opening I just love.. where you talk about being on the cusp of silence... The imagery there is quite dark and an excellent analogy about how we can go from feeling good to falling into despair and darknes.... yet the moon looked straight through my soulless eyes... damn.... such a traitor that moon.. sad when no one understands... amazing
Empress Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Awwn thank you silent one, i appreciate your feedback and how deeply you interpreted and understood my poem. You are such a deep reader, you should read more :D im beyond grateful for your detailed comment
Seeker Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 5:40 AM
A fav isn’t enough, this is frame-able! Easily the best poem I’ve read in a long time. Thanks for sharing, IE
Empress Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 9:49 AM
Oh wow thats a beautiful comment thank u so much for being so kind
Daniel Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 3:30 AM
Brilliant writing, IE, you are truly "the mistress of darkness" in this poem, way to go:)
Empress Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 9:48 AM
Thank you so much kind soul for your visit and for your beautiful comment truly grateful
Sharma  Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:51 AM
My gosh, Ink! You've a stupendous talent to astonish everyone's heart by weaving such garlands of beautiful florets or by conjuring a realm that is sequined with dark verses- either way, your talent is really so glorious and I'm always in awe.. This write is deeply vulnerable, aching, heartfelt and poignant.. I felt as if the soul is fading in the onyx embers of bleeding depth.. Sigh.. There are too many lines to quote here as fav but "the sun always knew of the pain","even black roses..red" Wow
Sharma  Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:53 AM
Evermore, your alliteration, vocabulary, artistic wordsmithery.. Ah, everything is beyond powerful and captivating.. Also, the quote that you've chosen by Poe, just brilliant.. Anxiety, depression, grief can be such cruel monsters that even though the moon looking through our soulless eyes can't recognise that we are dead inside..
Volumes Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 1:09 AM
No escape from that, that would freeze your soul into thickened vapors of bleeding ice. Such a description of madness would chill me, on a scorching day. Empress I have never seen such descriptions as you use in this vibrant prose. Such a dark subject that isn't morbid, but enchanted because of the way you scatter seeds of grief and tormented tears amid shimmering horizons and wistful peonies. Need I mention that I like it ?
Empress Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 1:17 AM
Awwn thank you so much rhyming queen, you are truly such a kind soul, appreciate your support so much
Jayasankar Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 11:51 PM
Aw this is such a stunning excellent write, dear Ink. You started carving this eloquent piece with your exquisite deep thoughts on the theme 'dark', molded it with alliterations, adorned it with such beautiful imagery and nailed it in the last stanza that drew my attention very much. Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
Empress Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 1:16 AM
Awwn you are so kind ani, i appreciate your support and reading my poem and feeling it . Grateful
Lawless Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 5:14 PM
that final couplet.....WOW...and the poem...a great big Boston WICKED AWESOME
Empress Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 1:16 AM
Awwn thats so nice of you, thank you so much for your support
Buehler Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 4:18 PM
The imagery of this dark, beautiful poem is exquisite, Ink. A masterfully crafted piece.
Empress Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 1:15 AM
Thank you kindly, truly grateful for your support
Pandit Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:44 AM
There’s no ray of twilight for the tormented tears, I hide behind the shimmering horizon, painted with dandelion dreams in dreary drowsiness---power of your pen invokes the pain that darkness brings and resonates in this theme. A stunning expression from your poetic talents, Ink.
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:59 AM
Thank you Vijay, i appreciate your kindness and support truly, im so glad you think this fits the theme. Grateful always
Rose  Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:15 AM
wow your bleeding ink draws me in, like the moon draws me at night, lovely poem, so well done Empress, you are deserving of your Avatar name !
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:58 AM
Awwn arent you a beautiful rose, i appreciate your kindness truly, your comments are so poetic. Thank you kind soul
Poet Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:12 AM
Dear friend, Ink, this piece is absolutely breathtaking! The way you have woven imagery into this poem is truly remarkable. Your talent shines through, It is not just an opinion, but a fact that this is a masterpiece. It is like a radiant gem, showcasing your immense poetic abilities. I cannot help but be captivated by the incredible power, profound depths, and immense heart that you have poured into this magnificent poem. And it has instantly become a favorite of mine.
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:56 AM
Dear Sotto, this is such a generous and generous thought that truly left me in awe, the way you’ve grasped every detail and considered it as a masterpiece is a gift, thank you , as this means alot coming from a talented poet like you
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 8:49 AM
wow, this is excellent use of imagery, so important in a dark free verse poem. Sure to score high!
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Thank you so very much talented poetess, means alot coming from you really
Lindley Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 8:08 AM
My good friend, you have gifted this dark poem and we that love poetry love this. A fact. This to me is indeed a very fine and true masterpiece. A glowing gem that shows immense poetic talents. A fine fav for my growing list. God bless you.
Lindley Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 8:35 AM
My friend, I always tell my friends, those that love Poe are indeed a special breed in poetry. As we see the amazing power, depths, poetic talent and immense heart of the famous poet that wrote it. What a brain, a mind that could gift us that wonder! God bless.
Lindley Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Please see my new blog here for my poems on Poe. I have them there on that blog only, have not placed them on my poems list here yet. God bless you .
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Poe is my most favorite dark poet ever. He writes dark like no other in my humble opinion, i am so glad to know that he is also on your top faves. I have a lot to learn , i am still learning.Thank you so much for your generous support truly i am blessed and honored
Lindley Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 8:11 AM
And my friend, that you quoted Poe is a definitive plus. He ranks as fourth in my own personal top ten best poets that ever lived list. He once held first place until I discovered in my youth Byron, Shelley and Keats. Yes , the Romantic poets got ahead of him.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 7:56 AM
Wonderful dark poem. Loved the ending. So true. However we die,, our blood would be red. Excellent poetry.
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Thank you so very much for your kindness and support im grateful truly
Goldsmith Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 7:35 AM
WOW!!! What a creative write/story/great ending. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Thank you dear poetess for your generous support im grateful
Rhymes Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 7:12 AM
As always another great poem . You never fail to amaze me . So talented and creative . Keep it up .
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:52 AM
Awwn you are so sweet thank you so much
Onpaper Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 7:10 AM
Mmmmthis piece… is gorgeous… the sun always knew of the pain I swirl to amongst silhouettes of burning stars.. mmmmm .. thorn to a kingdom that has no air for fragile flowers.. I surrender at the edge of doom to an agony of a pawn .. oooo that ending hoping to taste an ounce of her truth.. even black roses bleed the same as red … mmmmm it hit sooo good !!! Love this papu
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:52 AM
Thank you always papi you the best always for being so supportive truly im blessed
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