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Dangled Dreams

Neon lights lure souls streaming by, giving steel and brick a fresh face. For; only the young can supply the mortar that holds dreams in place. City roads form a maze of streets; the homeless claim the parks as theirs. And sleeping there when day retreats; beggars ignore the angry stares. Big city stench pollutes the air, as a chemical sun sets low. And these are odors all must bear; trapped under a smog's eerie glow. Prostitutes hustle day and night; selling pleasures of every type. And meant to whet your appetite; taverns accentuate the hype. Feeling the pressure to achieve; innocence gets tangled in sin. And dangled dreams draw the naïve; gambling that it's their chance to win.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2018 4:37:00 PM
Love these lines "dying dreams draw the naïve eager for their chance to begin."
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2018 9:27:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/25/2015 7:41:00 PM
Love it, great write
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/26/2015 5:53:00 PM
Thank you Stuart, your support is welcome. Emile.
Date: 12/25/2015 2:28:00 PM
Wow, an engaging write that poses numerous questions. I can visualise the imagery as well. Fantastic write.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/26/2015 5:54:00 PM
Thanks so much Mark, your comments are welcome. Emile.
Date: 12/25/2015 12:28:00 AM
Loved this poem Emile, very deep and thought provoking!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/25/2015 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

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