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Dane Ann-D Her Computer

Oh my Dane Technology and you Most unlucky in Computer zoo Hard drives crash Is it driver error Mums yelling What be her terror Floppies flopped Disc's located Printers dry My frustration updated Saved files Actually disappearing Megabytes biting Desperation nearing Flat screen Flickering Technology and I Bickering What in the world Have i to do To save my work On today's computer zoo For Dane and her computer, responding to her poem " Etceteras! " http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/dane-ann.php

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Kelly Zakerski

Date: 9/20/2009 3:08:00 AM

This is sooooooooo very true!! Absolutely loved it!

Krista Kurth

Date: 9/18/2009 12:44:00 PM

I hope that your poem sent some tech mojo Dane's way and that everything's working fine now! Krista

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/14/2009 2:10:00 PM

Very Nice... Technical Lingo down to a "Science !" Loved it... MoonBee

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/9/2009 8:21:00 PM

this is such a great write, and the experience of many.......;-)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/9/2009 12:36:00 PM

yup yup "energetic" people often "fry" electronics LOL my sis calls lightening losses about a TV every year and a half...she can't wear a watch it won't keep time...I've been known to "fry" electronic door locks...and Dane "fries" computers LOL Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/8/2009 9:41:00 AM

Thank you for writing and posting this one James. It will for sure uplift Dane Ann. Awesome piece of writing here. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/8/2009 4:02:00 AM

You named it, James! We all had sometimes problems with copmputers, printers etc. Well done your poem! Thank you for your comments. Gert

Jen H.

Date: 9/7/2009 6:44:00 PM

Nicely done John. Thanks for all of the comments! ~jen~

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/7/2009 6:27:00 PM

Creative, clever and FUN great poem James! ~Trudy~

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/7/2009 5:48:00 PM

nicey done, wish I could have been so clever!!

Date: 9/7/2009 4:02:00 PM

Computers sure can be a pain sometimes but what would we do without them. I can't imagine going back to manual typewriters. I like the last line--sums up the poem so well. Got a chuckle out of it. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Keep on writing. Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/7/2009 3:30:00 PM

That definitely cheered me up, James. Lots of chuckles and out loud laughing here in my computer room. Thanks, I needed that. And it's written oh so good! Smiling, Dane Ann

Kristy De La Keur Scoville

Date: 9/7/2009 3:29:00 PM

Very creative and imaganitive as well. Some things fantasy some real all put together in poem that is wonderful...Thanks...still waiting....The Southern Belle Kristy De La Keur

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/7/2009 3:19:00 PM

Technology and I have been bickering for years. The reference to a computer zoo is very creative and appropriate. Still working on the move, but wanted to say I miss you and all the great soupers like Dane Ann! Love you! Carolyn