James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Dane Ann-D Her Computer

Oh my Dane
Technology and you
Most unlucky in
Computer zoo

Hard drives crash
Is it driver error
Mums yelling
What be her terror

Floppies flopped
Disc's located
Printers dry
My frustration updated

Saved files 
Actually disappearing
Megabytes biting
Desperation nearing
 
Flat screen
Flickering
Technology and I
Bickering

What in the world
Have i to do
To save my work
On today's computer zoo


  For Dane and her computer, responding to her poem " Etceteras! "



    http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/dane-ann.php

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Kelly Zakerski September 20, 2009 at 3:08 AM This is sooooooooo very true!! Absolutely loved it!

Krista Kurth September 18, 2009 at 12:44 PM I hope that your poem sent some tech mojo Dane's way and that everything's working fine now! Krista

Moonbee Canady September 14, 2009 at 2:10 PM Very Nice... Technical Lingo down to a "Science !" Loved it... MoonBee

Abe Lopez September 9, 2009 at 8:21 PM this is such a great write, and the experience of many.......;-)

Debbie Guzzi September 9, 2009 at 12:36 PM yup yup "energetic" people often "fry" electronics LOL my sis calls lightening losses about a TV every year and a half...she can't wear a watch it won't keep time...I've been known to "fry" electronic door locks...and Dane "fries" computers LOL Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown September 8, 2009 at 9:41 AM Thank you for writing and posting this one James. It will for sure uplift Dane Ann. Awesome piece of writing here. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop September 8, 2009 at 4:02 AM You named it, James! We all had sometimes problems with copmputers, printers etc. Well done your poem! Thank you for your comments. Gert

Jen H. September 7, 2009 at 6:44 PM Nicely done John. Thanks for all of the comments! ~jen~

Trudy Diane Rider September 7, 2009 at 6:27 PM Creative, clever and FUN great poem James! ~Trudy~

Doris Culverhouse September 7, 2009 at 5:48 PM nicey done, wish I could have been so clever!!

September 7, 2009 at 4:02 PM Computers sure can be a pain sometimes but what would we do without them. I can't imagine going back to manual typewriters. I like the last line--sums up the poem so well. Got a chuckle out of it. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Keep on writing. Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen September 7, 2009 at 3:30 PM That definitely cheered me up, James. Lots of chuckles and out loud laughing here in my computer room. Thanks, I needed that. And it's written oh so good! Smiling, Dane Ann

Ashe Kristy De La Keur Scoville September 7, 2009 at 3:29 PM Very creative and imaganitive as well. Some things fantasy some real all put together in poem that is wonderful...Thanks...still waiting....The Southern Belle Kristy De La Keur

Carolyn Devonshire September 7, 2009 at 3:19 PM Technology and I have been bickering for years. The reference to a computer zoo is very creative and appropriate. Still working on the move, but wanted to say I miss you and all the great soupers like Dane Ann! Love you! Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop September 7, 2009 at 2:53 PM Lets go back to feathers,pen and ink..needed this poem,made me smile:)Charma

James Peranteau September 7, 2009 at 2:17 PM Pen and slip Mr. Fraser ! great write,..humorous as well !! james

Sara Kendrick September 7, 2009 at 1:47 PM Modern technology is great but not great. Sara

Raul Moreno September 7, 2009 at 1:43 PM This one made me laugh...Raul