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Dandelions - Visual 1

Dandelions – Visual 1 Stems rooted as future generations silently drift Dancing in the awakening of hope’s enlightening sunrise Buoyed upon the updrafts of fate and synchronicity. 1/30/2015 Submitted to Glorious Sijo Fields – Poetry Contest Sponsor – Andrea Dietrich

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:38:00 PM

This is very deep John... congrats...SKAT

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/11/2015 7:42:00 AM

Congratulations, John, as I get older, I'm tempted to let nature have her way and quit killing the dandelions (ha, ha) but then then my "peer" group would report me to the neighborhood police.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2015 5:23:00 PM

Way to go with this ballet winner..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 2/8/2015 2:10:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats John:-) hugs Jan xx

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/8/2015 10:10:00 AM

This is so deep with meaning, John ! Wow, I love how you saw this, and made it your own !! ("future generations silently drift)"....such insight, and so true!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/8/2015 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations John.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2015 4:57:00 AM

Oh John, this one really spoke to me. Congratulations on your top deserving placement! #7

John Lawless
Date: 2/8/2015 5:03:00 AM

Thanks Connie for your appreciation and high mark. I kinda like these flow of thought type forms.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/8/2015 4:28:00 AM

Excellent Sijo in which depth of thought is much in evidence. Well done, John....and congrats on a very worthy and merited win. // paul

John Lawless
Date: 2/8/2015 4:41:00 AM

Thanks Paul appreciate your comments

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2015 12:44:00 AM

the depth of meaning here is outstanding. You are such a thinker, but also you did it with imagery. Wonderful, and congratulations.

John Lawless
Date: 2/8/2015 4:40:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, this is one of those "stream of consciousness", continuity of thought type of forms for me. Appreciate the time and effort and expertise you put into the contests you administer.