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Dancing With Twilight

She skipped over puddles to where she could dance, twirling around for a second chance Under white pearly skies at twilight one foot in each season, things came in sight Then, the sky began to swirl and glow She reached with her arms and stood tip toe A delicate balance is all it would take to feel a new season's peace beyond past heartache Slowly, the next season took her hand Instead of falling, her inner will said, stand At a time of uncertainty, she chooses to be Dancing with twilight in the next memory Heidi Sands 4/12/23

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/27/2023 10:12:00 AM

An enchanting and wonderful write, Heidi... So lovely to read!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/27/2023 11:25:00 AM

Thank you Kelly. I appreciate your comment :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/18/2023 1:18:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poem Heidi, Hope her next season is filled with blooms and balmy days, Wonderful write, Hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/18/2023 2:12:00 PM

I am happy you enjoyed this Joseph. Thank you for the kind comment. Hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/15/2023 8:10:00 PM

I was struck by this line: 'Slowly, the next season took her hand.' It set off a series of images in my mind. Thank you, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/16/2023 5:11:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. I hope you have a nice day :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/15/2023 12:31:00 AM

I just love this. Awesome write. God bless you, Love, Gina

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/15/2023 6:06:00 AM

I am happy to hear that. Thank you Gina :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/14/2023 1:21:00 PM

Very beautiful! Magical poetry! Have a great day, Heidi. "At a time of uncertainty, she chooses to be Dancing with twilight in the next memory" -- Enchanting!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2023 1:23:00 PM

Thank you very much Joe . I appreciate your kind comment on this :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/14/2023 12:58:00 PM

Wow! Heidi, You've penned a well-written poem, with a good message and stellar imagery. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-)Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2023 1:00:00 PM

Thank you very much Alexis. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope you have a nice weekend too :)

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/14/2023 12:02:00 PM

Great encouraging poem , love it

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2023 12:37:00 PM

Thank you Stephan :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/14/2023 5:46:00 AM

Heidi, such beautiful imagery is created in reading each line! " slowly, the next season took her hand" is such an intriguing thought!! Great one! happy Friday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2023 5:54:00 AM

Thank you very much Mike. Happy Friday :) xxoo