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Dancing With Sinatra

Exchanging glances, but not a word We were strangers, from two different worlds Most everyone, had left the room to gather things, ..to say farewells... The hour late, and music played old sleepy ballads, softer,... smoother The D J's voice had come and gone, but, distant voices, laughing,... ringing Piano notes were lingering..... One saxophone had carried on You didn't ask, just took my hand and above us, as if our spirits wound us tight within Sinatra's song The stroke of midnight's tolling done While one by one, folks drifted home... Just a few of us, to dance the floor All sense of time had halted course... With shoes kicked off, and jackets hung We couldn't bear the evening's end I kept my head against your chest as if a home that I could trust The final dance would soon begin The music stopped, but we did not We couldn't break our tight embrace We couldn't tear ourselves apart And while we danced in pale moonlight Our eyes were closed, you kissed my face In this, our own, enchanted place You held me close, we danced alone The night was ours to keep and own Though not a word between us formed One lonely sax, had filled the room The one who sang, has come and gone But love songs linger,....on and on
_________________________________________________ For the Contest "At A Glance" Sponsored By Jared Pickett

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/27/2014 7:46:00 AM
Hi Carrie: Congratulations on winning . Sinatra was my favorite singer.
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Date: 7/21/2014 10:14:00 AM
I just love this. Awesome. Congratulations on winning the contest. God bless you and happy writing.
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:47:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to ...... Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/13/2014 4:53:00 PM
Wowee Grats on your win! :)
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Date: 7/13/2014 10:54:00 AM
a beautiful one, Carrie, Congrats for top win. Mohan
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Date: 7/13/2014 9:49:00 AM
congratulation on a fine win,nice take on the contest...more of a Dean Martin guy myself
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Date: 7/13/2014 7:50:00 AM
So romantic, Carrie! Congrats on a great win!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/13/2014 4:58:00 AM
U hv an Amazing pen Carrie! Unending love songs n memories that stay forever,, truly mesmerising! Congrats on top win!
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Date: 7/12/2014 3:18:00 PM
A beautiful endeavor... Congratulations Carrie on your win... Verlena
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Date: 7/12/2014 2:20:00 PM
Oldies never die, in fact they get better! Your poem proves it by winning again if i'm not mistaken. Well done Carrie, I thought I had read this before! :JP)Asavvy1
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Date: 7/18/2013 4:27:00 PM
A great favorite in this household. Lovely winning poem. BG
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Date: 7/18/2013 4:09:00 PM
Carrie, a lovely write filled with romance and love...'music stopped but we did not'....beautifully said. Big congrats. Hugs
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Date: 7/18/2013 8:18:00 AM
oh, i love this one, carrie! congratulations on a well-deserved first place win. this is beautiful and i could so clearly envision it all.
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Date: 7/18/2013 2:03:00 AM
Wow!! this is an amazing poem friend Carrie..perfect!! Congratulations on your Grand win!! Hugs, Maria
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Date: 7/17/2013 10:34:00 PM
Very romantic and beautiful. Many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 7/17/2013 5:42:00 PM
This is a special poem, congratulations
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Date: 7/17/2013 5:17:00 PM
wow! congrats Carrie, it is awesome...PD
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Date: 7/17/2013 4:04:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 7/17/2013 6:59:00 AM
wonderful poem. congrats for the win.
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Date: 7/17/2013 4:16:00 AM
OH YES Carrie, I remember this beauty but did not realize it was for a contest...Not surprised with the results...This reminds me so much of an evening spent wife the lovely lady who would later become my wife and soul-mate, the night we fell in love...Congratulations my friend (What Sinatra song was it?)
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Date: 7/16/2013 9:31:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your 1st place win with this romantic, nostalgic write! So sweet! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/4/2013 10:11:00 AM
this is wonderful, and I expect to see it high on the winner list. So you danced to Sinatra!!
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Date: 7/4/2013 8:52:00 AM
Great write Carrie ....Seren
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Date: 7/3/2013 8:06:00 PM
(Sigh)...Oh my oh my...Where to begin?...This takes me back to a magical night with my dearly beloved...The night we fell softly, gently and eternally in love...The song was 'Let it be Me' by Jerry Butler and Betty Everett...'Strangers in the Night', 'A Very Good Year', 'The Way You Look Tonight'...gotta know which one!...Don't know if you've read it, but please do me the honor of reading 'We Danced in the Kitchen'...Love you my friend - Tim
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Date: 7/3/2013 7:27:00 PM
superb Carrie totally love it Shadow x smiles
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