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Dancing Waves

dancing silent waves timid wary light of hope... a ship comes home By- Tahera Mannan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/21/2012 3:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Tahera! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/19/2012 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2012 5:15:00 PM
This seems like it will be happy but it has a tinge of sadness. I really like it. Congrats on the win, Tahera.
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:17:00 PM
congrats Tahera on an awesome win for splendid words and great imagery luv..
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:27:00 AM
Congrats, Tahera. Excellent piece. Great job. Nice going. All the best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:55:00 PM
TAHERA, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 3/1/2011 8:48:00 PM
The waters were definately dancing; welcoming home the exhausted sea vessel. I have experienced almost "silent waves" the last trip to Florida. Great line! Blessings. Gwendolen
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Date: 2/28/2011 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations Tahera, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:49:00 AM
Hello Tahera, This is a wonderful Haiku, It is an absolute winner to me. Congratulations in the contest win my dear As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:17:00 PM
Great job Tahera, good to see you in the top ten! Congratulations on your worthy poems eighth place honored win! Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/27/2011 1:07:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Tahera. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/27/2011 12:08:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your win with this beautiful Haiku!The last line is excellent--kashinath
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:36:00 AM
I love the light and celebratory feel of this haiku, Tahera :) Congrats! :)
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:40:00 AM
Way to go Tahera my friend and congrats on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write ... enjoy your sweet success and top ten victory with luv...
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:32:00 PM
You already should know how much I liked this one, Tahera. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:02:00 PM
Good work Tahera. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2011 8:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your 8th Place Win in my contest, Tahera. Thanks for your support. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/25/2011 7:57:00 AM
Love the imagery Tahera. Good job. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/24/2011 4:32:00 AM
Very creative and expressive work...Reads like a winner to me..I would hate to have to judge this contest for there are so many excellent works..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:17:00 PM
wow, tahera. I got to the end of the list and found probably one of my very favorites in this contest! Luv ,Andrea
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:25:00 AM
Nice use of imagery. I like the peaceful feel of this poem. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Keepon writing. Karen
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Date: 2/23/2011 8:40:00 AM
i feel like sawying with this glimmering piece, tahera! winning luck in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/23/2011 7:40:00 AM
Nice word paint of the picture with nice analogy, Tahera
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Date: 2/23/2011 7:09:00 AM
A very descriptive haiku. Good luck to you in the contest, Tahera.
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