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Dancing Sea

Pleasure of the sea In the thrill of dancing waves Of white satin lace. By CarolineCecile copyright © 01.13.10 For Paul Moreno's contest, “Seascape”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/24/2010 10:50:00 AM
beautiful haiku! very visual, makes me miss the sea. thanks so much for your most thoughtful comment and kind congrats on my feature. sincerely appreciated. love, shar
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Date: 3/29/2010 7:02:00 PM
i like this scene,thanx!
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Date: 2/14/2010 8:09:00 PM
Short and sweet.I am depressed right now cause I had to put my dog to sleep last night..I miss him badly.I can't stop crying.I will chat more later.Hope all is well.
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Date: 2/14/2010 11:55:00 AM
I like the lace idea, it fits well!!
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Date: 2/14/2010 8:33:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku Caroline, white satin lace sounds so delightful >> good luck in Raul's contest >> James
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Date: 2/14/2010 8:26:00 AM
Great entry for Raul's contest. Best of luck to you. I like the "dancing waves."
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Date: 2/13/2010 7:54:00 PM
This is a beautiful Haiku...so romantic...I love it...good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 2/13/2010 4:10:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku...romantic vision you have created, dear Caroline! Goes to my favs. Peace, love, Audrey
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