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Dancing Lilies

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Dancing white ladies twirl and sway on pointed satin stems 

Arched backwards in time, with adagio’s breath in soft fluttering 

Clustered flowers dance in evening breeze, folding wings at sundown

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Harry Horsman Date: 1/5/2012 9:49:00 AM Number one for sure, missed it first time around, glad i've read it now, one can see the picture as the words unfold. beautifull. harry Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/5/2012 6:29:00 AM Congratulations on your win in ~Brian's~ "Image" contest Carrie. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/3/2012 3:17:00 PM nice use of form..hope all is well? Congrad's on your win Light & Love Login to Reply

Greg Stanley Date: 1/1/2012 10:15:00 PM Carrie, what a nice write, congratulations on you big win, Greg Login to Reply

J. Dover Date: 1/1/2012 2:21:00 PM Great poem, Carrie! Congratulations on your win! Love, J. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/1/2012 3:00:00 AM rated A for awesome.. congrats on your top win, carrie!..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Jon Arno Date: 12/31/2011 9:51:00 PM Congratulations Carrie :) Best regards, Jon Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 12/31/2011 6:47:00 PM Oh Carrie..what a beauty..congrats on your big win.BG Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/31/2011 4:50:00 PM wow, great imagery, and congrats in the contest. You can just see them dancing in that field! Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 12/31/2011 12:03:00 PM Congratulations on the win, Carrie. While reading this, Disney's "Fantasia" suddenly came to mind. I received images of those flowers dancing to the music of Tchaikovsky. Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 7/19/2011 4:48:00 PM Simply beautiful, Carrie. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/19/2011 11:50:00 AM Congrats Carrie on another great win with this dancing lilies poetry so refreshing and delightful...enjoy luv.. Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 7/19/2011 8:39:00 AM lovely Sijo and again I see congrats are in order. Be blessed Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 7/19/2011 6:56:00 AM Congrats on your win, Carrie. Excellent piece. Nice going. luv Ralph Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/19/2011 5:47:00 AM Congratulations Carrie on your win in Brian Strand's "Poesy"contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/18/2011 11:08:00 PM so lyrical i wan to dance!...sweetest of cheers to you for the high win, carrie! :)huggs! Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 7/18/2011 10:22:00 PM Very pretty, carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 6/3/2011 10:12:00 AM Congratulations on your very fine win, Carrie! Beautiful Sijo! Hope all is well. Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Iolanda Scripca Date: 6/3/2011 8:19:00 AM Fantastic Sijo you created, dear Carrie! I can feel your originality and grace...Congratulations, dear friend! Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 6/1/2011 9:54:00 PM Such a fantstic image hun. Many congrats for this win Carrie. Login to Reply

Dr Hitendra Mehta Date: 6/1/2011 10:12:00 AM Many congrats Carrie on notching up top honours in ^Rick's contest with this beautiful imagery. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/1/2011 6:31:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Carrie. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/31/2011 7:06:00 PM As I said before, THIS is it. Everything about it I love,Carrie. Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/31/2011 6:34:00 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest, Carrie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/31/2011 3:57:00 PM congrats Carrie on a wonderful win in Rick's contest with this awesome entry from the photo .. enjoy another sweet success with luv.. Login to Reply

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