Carrie Richards Poet Sijo

Dancing Lilies

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Dancing white ladies twirl and sway on pointed satin stems 

Arched backwards in time, with adagio’s breath in soft fluttering 

Clustered flowers dance in evening breeze, folding wings at sundown

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Harry Horsman January 5, 2012 at 9:49 AM Number one for sure, missed it first time around, glad i've read it now, one can see the picture as the words unfold. beautifull. harry

Carol Sunshine Brown January 5, 2012 at 6:29 AM Congratulations on your win in ~Brian's~ "Image" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi January 3, 2012 at 3:17 PM nice use of form..hope all is well? Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Greg Stanley January 1, 2012 at 10:15 PM Carrie, what a nice write, congratulations on you big win, Greg

J. Dover January 1, 2012 at 2:21 PM Great poem, Carrie! Congratulations on your win! Love, J.

Nette Onclaud January 1, 2012 at 3:00 AM rated A for awesome.. congrats on your top win, carrie!..:) huggs!

Jon Arno December 31, 2011 at 9:51 PM Congratulations Carrie :) Best regards, Jon

Barbara Gorelick December 31, 2011 at 6:47 PM Oh Carrie..what a beauty..congrats on your big win.BG

Andrea Dietrich December 31, 2011 at 4:50 PM wow, great imagery, and congrats in the contest. You can just see them dancing in that field!

Robert Pettit December 31, 2011 at 12:03 PM Congratulations on the win, Carrie. While reading this, Disney's "Fantasia" suddenly came to mind. I received images of those flowers dancing to the music of Tchaikovsky.

Elaine George July 19, 2011 at 4:48 PM Simply beautiful, Carrie. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 19, 2011 at 11:50 AM Congrats Carrie on another great win with this dancing lilies poetry so refreshing and delightful...enjoy luv..

Robert A. Dufresne July 19, 2011 at 8:39 AM lovely Sijo and again I see congrats are in order. Be blessed

Ralph Taylor July 19, 2011 at 6:56 AM Congrats on your win, Carrie. Excellent piece. Nice going. luv Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown July 19, 2011 at 5:47 AM Congratulations Carrie on your win in Brian Strand's "Poesy"contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud July 18, 2011 at 11:08 PM so lyrical i wan to dance!...sweetest of cheers to you for the high win, carrie! :)huggs!

Joyce Johnson July 18, 2011 at 10:22 PM Very pretty, carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick June 3, 2011 at 10:12 AM Congratulations on your very fine win, Carrie! Beautiful Sijo! Hope all is well. Love, Annalise

Iolanda Scripca June 3, 2011 at 8:19 AM Fantastic Sijo you created, dear Carrie! I can feel your originality and grace...Congratulations, dear friend!

Tahera Mannan June 1, 2011 at 9:54 PM Such a fantstic image hun. Many congrats for this win Carrie.

Dr Hitendra Mehta June 1, 2011 at 10:12 AM Many congrats Carrie on notching up top honours in ^Rick's contest with this beautiful imagery. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Carol Sunshine Brown June 1, 2011 at 6:31 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich May 31, 2011 at 7:06 PM As I said before, THIS is it. Everything about it I love,Carrie. Congrats on your win!

Dr.Ram Mehta May 31, 2011 at 6:34 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 31, 2011 at 3:57 PM congrats Carrie on a wonderful win in Rick's contest with this awesome entry from the photo .. enjoy another sweet success with luv..

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