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Dancing Lilies

, Dancing white ladies twirl and sway on pointed satin stems Arched backwards in time, with adagio’s breath in soft fluttering Clustered flowers dance in evening breeze, folding wings at sundown

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Harry Horsman

Date: 1/5/2012 9:49:00 AM

Number one for sure, missed it first time around, glad i've read it now, one can see the picture as the words unfold. beautifull. harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/5/2012 6:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ~Brian's~ "Image" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2012 3:17:00 PM

nice use of form..hope all is well? Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Greg Stanley

Date: 1/1/2012 10:15:00 PM

Carrie, what a nice write, congratulations on you big win, Greg

J. Dover

Date: 1/1/2012 2:21:00 PM

Great poem, Carrie! Congratulations on your win! Love, J.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/1/2012 3:00:00 AM

rated A for awesome.. congrats on your top win, carrie!..:) huggs!

Jon Arno

Date: 12/31/2011 9:51:00 PM

Congratulations Carrie :) Best regards, Jon

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/31/2011 6:47:00 PM

Oh Carrie..what a beauty..congrats on your big win.BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2011 4:50:00 PM

wow, great imagery, and congrats in the contest. You can just see them dancing in that field!

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/31/2011 12:03:00 PM

Congratulations on the win, Carrie. While reading this, Disney's "Fantasia" suddenly came to mind. I received images of those flowers dancing to the music of Tchaikovsky.

Elaine George

Date: 7/19/2011 4:48:00 PM

Simply beautiful, Carrie. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/19/2011 11:50:00 AM

Congrats Carrie on another great win with this dancing lilies poetry so refreshing and delightful...enjoy luv..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/19/2011 8:39:00 AM

lovely Sijo and again I see congrats are in order. Be blessed

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/19/2011 6:56:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Carrie. Excellent piece. Nice going. luv Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2011 5:47:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your win in Brian Strand's "Poesy"contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/18/2011 11:08:00 PM

so lyrical i wan to dance!...sweetest of cheers to you for the high win, carrie! :)huggs!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/18/2011 10:22:00 PM

Very pretty, carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/3/2011 10:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your very fine win, Carrie! Beautiful Sijo! Hope all is well. Love, Annalise

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 6/3/2011 8:19:00 AM

Fantastic Sijo you created, dear Carrie! I can feel your originality and grace...Congratulations, dear friend!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 6/1/2011 9:54:00 PM

Such a fantstic image hun. Many congrats for this win Carrie.

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 6/1/2011 10:12:00 AM

Many congrats Carrie on notching up top honours in ^Rick's contest with this beautiful imagery. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2011 6:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2011 7:06:00 PM

As I said before, THIS is it. Everything about it I love,Carrie. Congrats on your win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/31/2011 6:34:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2011 3:57:00 PM

congrats Carrie on a wonderful win in Rick's contest with this awesome entry from the photo .. enjoy another sweet success with luv..