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Dancing Leaves

The wind rustles leaves They sway to an fro To the beat of the music Swaying, enjoying

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/25/2017 9:36:00 PM

Such lovely Fall imagery you bring to mind my friend. I can see autumn leaves dancing in delight! Thank you for your wonderful write my friend. Enjoyed!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/26/2017 8:19:00 AM

Hello Susan, when i hear the wind blow strongly all through the night, I dream of the dancing leaves. Also a wind blowing that way reminds me of the water rushing to the shore. have a nice day my friend.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 10/25/2017 1:30:00 PM

Nice sound, so relaxing. It's the music of the wind.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/25/2017 2:58:00 PM

Yes it is music to the wind.I like the sound it is a sound of water tome. Havea nice day my friend.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/16/2017 8:43:00 AM

Nice poem, Darlene, though it is not a tanka, it has lovely imagery:)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2017 2:07:00 PM

Jo you are right, it is not a tanka. I now realizes it is free verse. Thank you for pointing out my mistake.I am so pleased you like my poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/16/2017 12:38:00 AM

Nice Piece. But so far my knowledge, Tanka contains five lines with syllable count 5-7-5-7-7

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2017 2:11:00 PM

Thank you for pointing this mistake out to me. I will do better.I am trying to learn new forms,so if it is wrong you casn tell me so. This is how i learn thank you my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2017 8:19:00 PM

Now for your poem. It's quite seasonal and just the way I picture leaves in the fall , but tanka has five lines ordinarily. Anyway, it's nice to visit one of your poems!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/13/2017 7:43:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, so sorry I made a mistake. i will work harder on that. So you know I have no help when i write poetry. I just do the best I can. have anice day my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2017 8:18:00 PM

Hi, you asked me about someone named Alfred. Sorry to take so long to reply. I cannot remember who he is.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/13/2017 7:45:00 AM

That is alright. I have a feeling that he left poetry soup. Now it does not matter to me. Anyway thank you. have a nice day my riend.

Roy Pett

Date: 10/12/2017 1:52:00 PM

An absolutely beautiful Tanka Darlene, a joy to read. :))

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/12/2017 3:20:00 PM

Thank you Roy. I enjoyedto write this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Maria Williams

Date: 10/12/2017 6:26:00 AM

What a beautiful Tanka Darlene, the swaying leaves keeping time to music, beautiful...Maria

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/12/2017 7:28:00 AM

Hello Marie, thank you.when the wind blows it does look like tha leaves are dancing. Have a nice day my friend.

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/11/2017 4:33:00 PM

Darlene my love!!! I should visit more often... this is tanka!!! WooHoo!!! Lovesies, Limerick Jack xxx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/12/2017 7:29:00 PM

Hello Jack, yes this is a Tanka poem. So pleased that you like it. Have anice evening my friend. Hugs xxx My friend.

Juli- Michelle

Date: 10/11/2017 12:14:00 AM

I love this, Darlene. I love and hate Tankas because they always leave me wanting more! Love, Juli-Michelle

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/11/2017 7:37:00 AM

Hello Juli Michelle,thank you.A Tanka is always short. Nice to meet you. I like autumn for the coloured leaves only. I know what is coming next. have a nice day my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/10/2017 7:50:00 AM

I too loved the title as well! I enjoyed this so much xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/10/2017 10:14:00 AM

Hello Mike, thank you.I am pleased that you have enjoyed my poem.I do hope that you have a nice day my friend. xxxooo to you as well.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2017 5:48:00 PM

they sure are dancing with the autumnal winds Darlene:-) such lovely imagery:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/9/2017 5:58:00 PM

Thank you Jan I like the rustling sound of the leaves when the wind blows. It sounds like the waves hitting the shores.Have a nice eveniong my friend.xxx

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/9/2017 5:36:00 PM

I couldn't resist reading this one from the title and I just love it. Well done Darlene! Nice! :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/9/2017 6:00:00 PM

Hello Heidi, when the winds blows the leaves are dancing. Have a nice evening my friend.