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Dancing Dame In the Frame


Today... 
       Let me swirl, let me sway,
             I want to whirl my cares away.

Stand by...
           Let me float, let me fly,
                 I want to forget how to cry.

Don't stare...
              Let me dance, let me dare,
                    I want to romance with the air.

Joyride...
         Let me groove, let me glide,
               I want to move that samba stride.

Soft blush...
             Let me reel, let me rush,
                   I want to feel your gentle brush.

Stroke me...
           Let me spin a trot spree,
                 I want to grin through this boogie.

Alive...
      Let me jig, let me jive,
            I'm on a whirligig waltz drive.



09.24.17



Based on the painting "She dances in beauty" 
by Anna Razumovskaya
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 3/18/2023 1:29:00 PM
Oh, how I love to dance Jo. This is gorgeous. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/12/2023 11:55:00 PM
Beautiful ! I am charmed. Big Congrats to win.
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Date: 3/12/2023 11:05:00 AM
Oh Jo, simply lovely! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/11/2023 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your Contest win with this so lovely poem, Jo. Blessings
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Date: 10/2/2017 3:13:00 PM
Jo, CONGRATULATIONS again on another win with this poem !
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Date: 10/1/2017 10:50:00 PM
Congratulations Jo on another fine win for your beautifully written poem.
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Date: 10/1/2017 9:42:00 PM
Another nice rhyming poem from you Jo, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 9/26/2017 8:06:00 PM
Congratulations Jo on your sensual and beautifully written poem!
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Date: 9/26/2017 1:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jo
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Date: 9/26/2017 1:05:00 PM
Jo, beautiful poem, CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 9/26/2017 9:11:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win my friend. This sensual piece took me along for the ride and brought back many sweet memories of my youth!!!..... Soft blush... Let me reel, let me rush, I want to feel your gentle brush. Stroke me... Let me spin a trot spree, I want to grin through this boogie. Alive... Let me jig, let me jive, I'm on a whirligig waltz drive. ^^ Pure Gold!!!!
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Date: 9/26/2017 7:28:00 AM
A wonderful flowing take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/24/2017 11:10:00 PM
Wonderful images beautifully done ... a joy to read ....
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Date: 9/24/2017 4:25:00 PM
Beautifully written Jo...best wishes
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Date: 9/24/2017 3:07:00 PM
- So beautiful written for this contest, Jo - GL ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/24/2017 1:04:00 PM
ohh, word--images jutting out from the frame... you make me want to dance, jo; wonderful!..huggs
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Date: 9/24/2017 12:52:00 PM
enjoyed reading , Jo... luck in the contest... Hugs Eve ~`*
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