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Dance With Footle

Got cold Be bold Walk sea Nose free Sandy shore Dance floor Fox trot Real hot waltz time Refined Tango Hot beau Cha cha La la In line Dance time Tired now Home go Shoes off Start cough

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/11/2013 1:23:00 PM

well miss night kiss well done each one good write good night and thats my footle to you little star xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/11/2013 10:19:00 AM

hey these are good,, need some lessons first i do...

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/11/2013 10:26:00 AM

lol what are lessons, once you got the first two its easy, its thinking of the theme your taking.could go on all day once you start. remember just 2 syllables a line. how about Dance Date

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/11/2013 4:23:00 AM

Read all Start applaud!

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/11/2013 6:45:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios, was fun writing them...Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2013 12:01:00 AM

Wonderful footles.. Seren....the second to last is the most enjoyable. ...good night...pd

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/11/2013 6:45:00 AM

awww the tired now one. Seren

David Williams

Date: 2/10/2013 3:11:00 PM

Seren fancy a waltz?...i like....David

David Williams
Date: 2/12/2013 8:52:00 AM

yes you did!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/10/2013 4:07:00 PM

Yes please David, I love dancing, can do all ballroom and latin american. But: a tango is my worst, you need a strong leading man for that. UMMMM did I hear an offer then ....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/10/2013 12:17:00 PM

This is simply a brilliant and wondrous write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful groupings of Footles, especially the one, "Fox trot, Real hot" that was my favorite! What a beautiful poem, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/10/2013 3:03:00 PM

couldnt work out samba and rumba lol .Seren