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Dance of the Gold

farewell performance.... leaves pirouette in the wind dressed in vintage jewels

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/16/2018 8:58:00 PM

Beautifully penned - a FAVE with me.

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/6/2010 4:10:00 AM

Amazing haiku Carrie, this one evoked some great imagery. Great job...Raul

Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/24/2010 1:50:00 PM

Nice. I don't know what to say other than the fact this is a pretty piece of poetry. It's quite lovely. Congratulations on your thirteenth place win!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/9/2010 5:46:00 PM

NO dots line 1, dotted indicate cutting line, naughty ;) congrad's on your win I have haikuaphobia LOL

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 3:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carrie in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 4:39:00 PM

beautiful imagery in this haiku, much enjoyed ,congrats on your win

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/6/2010 2:21:00 PM

one last hurrah! nicely done Carrie. Congratw to you

Ray Dillard

Date: 9/6/2010 12:04:00 PM

What a pretty perspective! Beautiful! RAY

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 11:12:00 AM

Beautiful poem and win, Carrie. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/6/2010 4:23:00 AM

Carrie, congratultions on your win with this gem, love Wilma

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/5/2010 10:12:00 PM

Imaginative and elegant haiku Carrie. Congratulations on your win.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/5/2010 8:59:00 PM

Wow on your powerful imagery. Many congratulations on your win.

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/5/2010 7:52:00 PM

Congratulations on you 13th Place Win in Rick's "Leaf In The Wind" Contest, Carrie! Beautiful imagery...Love, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 7:01:00 PM

Congratulations on the 13th place win inthe contest, Carrie

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/5/2010 6:02:00 PM

I can visualize the leaves dressed in vintage jewels. Beautiful haiku, dear Carrie. Congratulations on your win. Love, iolanda

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/5/2010 5:47:00 PM

Congrats, Carrie. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 5:11:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your win in Rick's contest... a lovely write and win for u to enjoy tonight with luv...

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/5/2010 5:01:00 PM

Pretty...the jewel bit is great. congrats on your win. BG

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 9/2/2010 5:29:00 PM

Good one, Carrie. It catches the moment well. Good luck! I always enjoy your work. Regards, Gerard.

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/1/2010 4:51:00 AM

Oh it’s a Great sketch of the beauty of the ballet dancer. Beautiful Haiku and use of words like vintage jewels. Absolutely beautiful, My good wishes for your contest entry. Any many thanks for your ever precious and lovely comments always on my Poem my friend. Sorry I was away from internet in the last 7-8 days and couldn't acknowledge it earlier. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra.......Carrie Richards

Skat A

Date: 8/31/2010 7:34:00 PM

Enjoyed your haiku~SKAT

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/31/2010 6:26:00 PM

Excellent entry, Carrie. Great haiku. Good luck. Thanks for your kind words. xxxRalph

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 8/31/2010 5:15:00 PM

Beautiful feeling of Fall. I miss it once in a while here in SCal...Thanks for your nice comments :) Love, Iolanda

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/31/2010 10:19:00 AM

enjoyed reading your haiku, I like the vintage jewels phrase!! well done!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2010 3:19:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive of the season of fall that should be in the winners' circle for sure..I especially like the last line..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara