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Dance of Raindrops

Raindrops fall in a winter’s cold puddle, With circular impressions, dancing on the surface Bubbles float briefly, before they disappear Moving dots for now, it hasn’t frozen yet today A chance for the rain to be heard in a puddle From a jumping dance across reflections seen In a moving, twinkling sight on a dreary day, The raindrops join in winter’s puddle to play Heidi Sands 11/19/19

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Date: 11/20/2019 4:17:00 PM
I like this poem Heidi, good job!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/20/2019 4:24:00 PM
Thank you very much. I am happy you like it :)
Date: 11/20/2019 8:42:00 AM
i enjoyed your rain dance Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/20/2019 4:24:00 PM
Happy to hear that Jan. Thank you :)
Date: 11/20/2019 5:36:00 AM
- A playful dance, Heidi ... lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/20/2019 6:02:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. Hugs :)
Date: 11/19/2019 12:54:00 PM
I love to see a good downpour, preferably from inside but when I was at work we just carried on working regardless. Love the imagery Heidi. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/20/2019 6:02:00 AM
Hi Tom. Yes, I can understand that. What did you say you do for work again? Thank you for your comment on this. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 11/19/2019 12:14:00 PM
Rain can be beautiful as you show in this work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/19/2019 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Matthew. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 11/19/2019 10:09:00 AM
Enjoyed the dance of raindrops--a beautiful write, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/19/2019 12:25:00 PM
Great to hear Vijay! Thank you. Have a nice afternoon :)
Date: 11/19/2019 10:08:00 AM
Choreography of dancing raindrops so well directed dearest , Heidi! Hugs xxx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/19/2019 10:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios :)
Date: 11/19/2019 9:31:00 AM
This was fun Heidi. It read like a song with a melody that would make anyone join in on the dance. Beautifully done.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/19/2019 9:40:00 AM
Thank you for your kind, positive feedback Chris. I am grateful :)

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