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Dance of Light

A black and white butterfly Flew along beside me today As I walked, it happily moved Then, it quietly landed My walk is like a flight In the dance of light in life The butterfly discovered it too Heidi Sands 6/7/18 Placed 2nd in Contest 575. Sponsor: Brian Strand

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P.M. Richter
Date: 4/14/2019 11:06:00 AM
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Beautiful poem ~ congrats on your win :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2019 11:16:00 AM
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Thank you very much P.M. :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/15/2019 1:00:00 PM
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Heartiest congratulations on your win with this fantastic write, Heidi!:-)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/15/2019 1:06:00 PM
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Thank you Edward :)
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 6/8/2018 10:16:00 AM
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A beautiful example of a free verse poem, you have said so much in just a few words,
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/8/2018 10:30:00 AM
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Thank you Faraz :)
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 6/8/2018 6:46:00 AM
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Love the flow and the structure, beautifully composed. Faux
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/8/2018 8:01:00 AM
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Thank you so much Faux :)
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Harry Horsman
Date: 6/8/2018 5:46:00 AM
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Love this Heidi, and the message it portrays.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/8/2018 6:36:00 AM
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Thank you Harry. I am happy to hear that :)
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Robertina B.
Date: 6/7/2018 6:15:00 PM
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Such a lovely free verse, Heidi.. So cheerful.. I adore butterflies!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/7/2018 6:16:00 PM
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Thank you Robertina. Me too :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/7/2018 4:59:00 PM
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They are so graceful how they flutter around, I love to watch them in the garden in summertime. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/7/2018 5:20:00 PM
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Yes they are Tom. There are so many kinds around here too. I love to watch them. Thank you for your comment :)
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Joseph May
Date: 6/7/2018 2:24:00 PM
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A fluttering beauty...Wondewrful write Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/7/2018 2:28:00 PM
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Thank you Joseph :)

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