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Damned Dandelions

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You set me uneasy To be troubled No expository of straight forward facts But gentleness, as if kissed by the breeze I cannot avoid a breeze One by one, pieces of me escape To become your wishes And I am left As a black heart

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David Kavanagh

Date: 4/13/2024 10:18:00 AM

Some beautifully crafted lines here Dilly, so much said in a short verse, no need to say any more, you appear to have captured the essence of life’s ephemerality, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/13/2024 11:35:00 AM

Great idea, I’m sure it will be a big hit with poets on the soup, go for it!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/13/2024 11:24:00 AM

Thanks David, I've been spotting so much ephemera on my travels. I photographed it with intent to turn it into a poem. Perhaps I'll turn it into a contest :)

John Lawless

Date: 4/13/2024 9:31:00 AM

the personification of the dandelion and its troubled existence...

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/13/2024 11:21:00 AM

Indeed