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Redbird wrings its wings—faces The safety downward; makes the Fall and pain less dear—she's too Broken in to fly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/7/2023 3:33:00 PM
In cages with the door wide open. Powerful write <3
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Date: 2/28/2023 11:29:00 AM
That's a fairly potent emotion to conjure up in such a brief space! Excellent writing! I wish for her to be well. Thanks for your support on my page.
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Date: 2/27/2023 5:48:00 PM
As I read this I cannot help but want her to find safety. That is a pretty powerful feeling to invoke in four lines! Very well written! A.S.
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