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DAFFODILS daffodils thrive in very late Winter with no reflection of their beauty which is readily discoursed before other buds blossom daffodils alive because rains have been plentiful yellow same as dandelions which scatter by wind but daffodils are planned not promiscuous 3/11/2021

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/13/2021 9:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write with the pretty yellow daffodils/picture. Have a blessed day/weekend..........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2021 3:01:00 AM

I like this winner. Did you know that our ancestors brought this over here to America for food and medicine. Something we don't want in our yards they used to sustain them. Congrats. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2021 3:54:00 AM

I did not know that. Thank you for the interesting information! Thank you!

Gary Radice

Date: 3/13/2021 12:55:00 AM

I like the use of personification of the dandelions being promiscuous. :) I'm fascinated by the name dandelion = Les dents de Lion = lions teeth. Congratulations on your win. Cheers - Gary

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2021 3:56:00 AM

Ooh..l always love when readers add their thoughts. I love that you shared the French and its translation. Thank you, Gary! Hugs

Constance La France

Date: 3/12/2021 3:48:00 PM

Kim, congratulations on your win in Brian's All Yours contest with this wonderful Free Verse, and I love your images also, well done _Constance

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2021 5:55:00 PM

Thank you, Constance!

Paris-Maree Boreham

Date: 3/12/2021 3:28:00 PM

Daffodils always make me happy, delightful poem! Congratulations on your win !!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2021 5:55:00 PM

Thank you, Paris-Maree!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/11/2021 11:22:00 PM

You have met the wrong daffodils, Kim. "but daffodils are planned not promiscuous" I have met the others.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2021 5:32:00 AM

Compared to dandelion seeds ;) On my walk I saw a neat plot of dandelions. Thanks for commenting, my sweet friend!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/11/2021 10:23:00 AM

Beautiful flowers. Not always easy to keep year after year.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2021 11:38:00 AM

Yes.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/11/2021 9:52:00 AM

i prefer daffodils to dandelions but adore their vibrant colour:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2021 11:35:00 AM

We all are looking for sunshine! <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/11/2021 6:26:00 AM

- Both daffodils and dandelions are beautiful ... like sunshine in the spring ... I look forward to them coming ... yesterday we had a heavy snowstorm ... and spring seemed far away :) - A lovely poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2021 11:32:00 AM

No one looks forward to snow so close to Spring! <3