Daffodil

Dreamscape of daffodils Designed in acrylic Depicts saffron smeared faith Dawning of balmy views Deep pink and purple hues Drifting through musky air Darling, you'll find me there

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 11/18/2023 8:00:00 AM

From dreams to the dawn, a special transition moving swiftly inspired by nature's beauty. Thanks for sharing your pleiades with us.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/15/2023 7:50:00 PM

A beautiful descriptive write, Ink Empress! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk

Date: 9/14/2023 10:43:00 PM

Oh this is smothering in dreamy daffodils your expressions a touch of paradise. Congratulations on this lovely win poetess!

Terry Miller

Date: 9/12/2023 1:11:00 AM

One of the best in a competitive competition; congratulations.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 5:42:00 AM

So kind of you to say thank you so much

A. Ormulyce

Date: 9/11/2023 7:41:00 PM

"Dreamscape of daffodils," yes, magical and inspiring flowers. A Pleiades so beautifully penned.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 5:41:00 AM

Awwn thank you

Joseph May

Date: 9/11/2023 5:51:00 PM

Nicely penned Empress, Congrats on your win

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 5:41:00 AM

Thank you so very much for teaching me this new form. Was fun doing it

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/11/2023 5:18:00 AM

I echo the sentiments of this excellent poem of yours dear poetess. I especially loved your lines, "dawning of balmy views, deep pink and purple hues." Thanks for this gorgeous pleiades and best wishes in what appears to be a very competitive contest on the soup.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 5:41:00 AM

Thank you so much it is a very hard form as it doesnt have much freedom to express: appreciate your kind visit

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/10/2023 2:15:00 PM

Daffodil such a fun word and your last line adds much merry-making...Who could stay away from such a beautiful portrait you brush. Bol in the contest...great entry!

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/11/2023 1:23:00 PM

Back to Congratulate you---well-deserved, I.E.!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/11/2023 4:22:00 AM

Thank you my kind poetess, your visits are always so very appreciated. Grateful that you enjoyed reading this.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/10/2023 1:17:00 PM

This is a very good Pleiades, Empress; even enriched by a sprinkling of alliteration and rhyme. Yes, many people think that only yellow daffodils exist; if not mistaken even blue daffodils have been cultivated, though I've never seen one! ~ Regards // paul

Ink Empress
Date: 9/11/2023 4:20:00 AM

This is such a great compliment, that you would think its a good pleiades, yes i always love researching and reading more about flowers and gems, so i did a little of that before i wrote this. Thank you for your graceful visit, so generous of you . Grateful

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/10/2023 12:34:00 PM

So lovely, Ink Empress. This jewel is in my faves. :)

Ink Empress
Date: 9/11/2023 4:19:00 AM

That is so kind of you, i appreciate your visit and fave. Thank you sooo much

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/10/2023 8:38:00 AM

How sweet and beautiful this is...Loved it

Ink Empress
Date: 9/11/2023 4:19:00 AM

Awwn thank you so much sweet soul

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/10/2023 12:40:00 AM

You have taught me something new dear Empress. I always thought daffodils only came in yellow. I now discover there are also pink and purple varieties too. So enchanting to write about the lesser known. Your poem abounds in the sweet scent of musky air and I see fields of saffron daffodils, and there you are waiting, heart filled with anticipation. Wow I just realized I got all of that from your 7 tiny lines ! Incredible.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/11/2023 4:18:00 AM

Awwn thank you so much, i did a little research on what daffodils mean and their colors and varieties etc. we dont really get much here where im from. Your comments are as always soul warming thank u truly

Bill Baker

Date: 9/9/2023 5:45:00 PM

Your Pleiades paints a lovely image of Daffodils, a favorite of mine and my wife Sara's. I like the added alliteration in lines 3 & 5 ... saffron smeared and pink and purple. It's like putting a cherry on top to me. Thanks for sharing your gift of poetry with us my new friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Ink Empress
Date: 9/11/2023 4:17:00 AM

Ah Bill, i always appreciate you and your wife’s comments, so kind and generous you both are. Thank you also for pointing out your favorite lines and what you liked. Grateful for your support

Paige Hind

Date: 9/9/2023 5:01:00 PM

I've been so moved by your poetry that I wrote a poem in response. I hope that's okay, and that you feel a bit lighter....:)

Ink Empress
Date: 9/11/2023 4:16:00 AM

Thank you so much for the response and for sprinkling your admiration on my poems. I appreciate your kindness

Paige Hind

Date: 9/9/2023 2:36:00 PM

Quite beautiful. I loved the part about saffron smeared faith.

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/9/2023 1:23:00 PM

This is truly exquisite,’Dreamscape of daffodils’. Such incredible, thoughtful, crafted words that depict so much. You possess such great command of poetic language. So impressive and inspiring! Thank you for sharing and good luck with the competition. Blessings to you.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/11/2023 4:12:00 AM

Thank you kind poetess for your generous and heartfelt feedback. Truly grateful for your visit and thoughts on my little poem.

Fading Star Silence

Date: 9/9/2023 10:11:00 AM

And again, your poem has reached deep within and pulled out all the emotions with your never ending grace and divinity of your heart mind and soul, always speaking such volumes to how I feel..both the beauty and the hardships you weave into such masterpieces, my beautiful soul sis! “Dreamscape of daffodils” of course your ethereal artistry would dream up such mesmeric words, stirring one’s soul..pulling at the heartstrings with the breathtaking way you weave. “Designed in acrylic” — again the way you’ve used acrylic is so beautifully unique to show the imagery you paint so exquisitely. “Saffron smeared faith”, “dawning of balmy views”, “drifting through murky air, darling you’ll find me there” such a delicately powerful ending! You always amaze me, my soul sis! I’m forever awestruck, feeling your words!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/11/2023 4:05:00 AM

Awwn my beautiful soul sis you are too sweet and kind, im grateful that you think this poem is good enough. It definitely isnt an easy form n i feel so blessed to be read by you. Thank you again for visiting my page

Silent One

Date: 9/9/2023 7:43:00 AM

Love a daffodil, its a sign of new beginnings... Spring is a lovely month... I'm sure your poem will do very well in the contest. Nice choice of words and your contained them well in the syllable restrictions.. I have not done this form in such a long time... if only I had time... life is so busy...

Ink Empress
Date: 9/9/2023 9:38:00 AM

Well you are the silent gardener so you would know all about flowers. Thank you so much for visiting. That made my day!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2023 6:41:00 AM

Just got the catalogues selling those wonderful bulbs and can imagine a yard and woods filled with those fantastic daffodils, but, alas, we are no longer able to plant them. Thanks for sharing this dreamscape with us. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 9/9/2023 9:37:00 AM

Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful thoughts. I appreciate your support always

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/9/2023 6:17:00 AM

Dear friend Ink, your writing is exquisite. The first line captures the essence of beauty and mystique effortlessly. I really enjoyed reading this tribute to daffodils, as it transported me to a world filled with their enchanting fragrance. The final line is absolutely flawless, displaying a high level of skill and refinement. Your portrayal of these daffodils is so vivid and captivating, akin to a master painter expertly creating a masterpiece using beautifully splattered words. Have a great WE

Ink Empress
Date: 9/9/2023 9:36:00 AM

Ah thank you my friend, this means alot coming from such a prolific poet like you. I appreciate your feedback and your poetic response is so very dreamy itself.wish you a beautiful weekend too

Valsa George

Date: 9/9/2023 6:10:00 AM

Simply lovely is this dreamscape of daffodils. The last line is truly an icing on the cake. Love it so much. A great entry for the contest. All the Best dear Empress.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/9/2023 9:35:00 AM

Thank you always for being so kind, i appreciate your support truly.

Tom Woody

Date: 9/9/2023 6:06:00 AM

Finding her there, daydreaming in a dreamscape of daffodils. Lovely word portrait. Hope your weekend is peaceful

Ink Empress
Date: 9/9/2023 9:34:00 AM

Kingy, i hope your weekend is going well too. We had a day of voting today. Intense. Thank you for the beautiful comment. I always appreciate your comments as they are always sincere

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/9/2023 5:11:00 AM

Wow wow, my lovely Ink, you never cease to mesmerise my heart and enchant my soul "dreamscape of daffodils designed in acrylic" Now that's a vivid painting of fascinating fragrance. "Depicts saffron smeared faith" Absolutely love the "saffron smeared faith".. "Dawning of balmy views" Ahh, and the colour references of deep pink & purple gosh, that definitely is my favorite! "Definitely through musky air, darling, you'll find me there" That last line is truly impeccable and the touch of finesse :)

Ink Empress
Date: 9/9/2023 5:20:00 AM

My beautiful angelic star, i always appreciate you making me feel special :D haha awwnn you made my day with this detailed and soulful comment. Just like your username of insta, not only are your poems soulful but your comments too, and so poetic you are . Thank you soo much

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/9/2023 4:53:00 AM

Your opening line says beauty and mystic! Much enjoyed this ode to daffodils, Ink--Drifting through musky air--and I loved the turn in the ending line. You rock my friend.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/9/2023 5:08:00 AM

Ahh thank you Vijay, you are so very kind to say this. I appreciate always your kind support

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/9/2023 4:30:00 AM

My good friend, this is a definitive and powerful new creation that you have gifted us. Such very fine imagery cast out for our consumption. So like a top artist painting in beautifully splashed words! God bless you.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/9/2023 5:08:00 AM

Thank you always for seeing beauty in everything, you are truly a very generous soul. Appreciate your support