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Dad's work shed I recall today the scent of wood and dust in the air cobwebs in corners and crooks sun flooding in through windows . . . his scarred and scored wooden work table the countless tin cans of nails and screws Dad working on a new plan his coffee cup forgotten and ignored and I would bring him flowers . . . precious dandelions, buttercups and daisies which he would place in a dirty container of some sort smiling, he would lift me up to sit beside him we would ponder his scribbled sketches oh, the grand ideas he had . . . I still have those doodles and outlines I look at them sometimes and remember slowly the lazy afternoon would pass for me and Dad later we would sit on the rusty porch swing side by side, just swinging . . . I would hold his hand so tight like I never wanted to let it go but, God had a plan written in the book of destiny for my Dad and who am I- to question what God has written so, I had to let go of his hand and this is the day I became a writer of poetry ____________________________ Written July 21, 1997 Poetry/Free Verse/Dad's Work Shed- Throwback Copyright Protected, ID 07-1437-303-21 All Rights Reserved, 1997, Constance La France I wrote this poem on the day of my Dad's death July 21, 1997, at 10am. I had always written things like stories about my cats or flowers I liked, but on July 21, 1997 two hours after Dad's death I stood in his work shed with the eyes of a poet for the first time, and found my poetic voice that day and this began my journey. I posted this poem on poetry soup in 2013 for a second time, I had been on the site earlier than that but had left and deleted all my early poems but it was originally my first poem. Submitted to the Standard contest, The Throwback Challenge sponsor, Natasha L. Scragg, Judged 03/11/2022 First Place

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Date: 3/15/2022 10:38:00 AM
Constance, what a gift was awakened that day - a legacy from your dad. Beautiful tribute so rich in sensory images and in memory. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/16/2022 10:39:00 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/12/2022 7:51:00 PM
Amazing write Constance, congrats! brought back memories of my dad, thank you...
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Date: 3/14/2022 3:10:00 PM
Jim, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, oh yes memories of our dad's will ever haunt us, my dad died suddenly and I never got a chance to say goodbye ~Constance
Date: 3/12/2022 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Sorry about your dad. I know it is hard. I am still not over my dad and his was before your dad. Glad you found your poetic voice. You are an amazing writer. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.......................
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Date: 3/12/2022 4:18:00 PM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and compliment on my poem and my writing, but most of all for your compassion, it is not easy to lose a Dad, we never get over it, sorry about your Dad too ~Constance
Date: 3/12/2022 3:26:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this gem. God bless you.
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Date: 3/12/2022 4:18:00 PM
Beata, thanks for the congrats and for the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 3/12/2022 1:56:00 AM
Connie your words are stunningly simple and heartfelt. Pure love! Lonna
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Date: 3/12/2022 4:19:00 PM
Lonna, thank you so much for the compliment ~Constance
Date: 3/8/2022 9:12:00 AM
A beautiful memory and tribute to your dad Constance. It's interesting to see how this change in your life inspired you to get creating poetry. Coping with losses are very tough experiences and poetry can be great therapy in such difficult times. It helps us to stay positive. Thank you for your story Constance. I'm sure that our fellow Soupers will find this very moving as I do XXX warmest wishes.
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Date: 3/8/2022 10:15:00 AM
Natasha, thank you so much for the meaningful comment, yes, two hours after my Dad's death was the beginning of my true poetic journey, I found my voice and I believe it was the gift he left me, blessings ~Constance
Date: 3/8/2022 8:14:00 AM
Constance, your poem is simply beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes as I thought how wonderful it would have been to have had such a sweet, warm relationship with my father. Surely, this is a winner!~
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Date: 3/8/2022 9:07:00 AM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, it has always been an emotional poem for me. My father was a man of quotes he had one for every reason, maybe that is why I love quotes. He taught me all he knew of nature and he was creative, and a storyteller, I was never tired of his tall tales (mother said they were only half true and some more imagination) yes, I was lucky ~Constance

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