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Dad's Car Seasoned Well

Summer Funny Limerick Poetry Contest Tania Kitchin The heat of summer in his dad's car The son takes his date to gaze a star Lover's lane shines on so bright Two teenagers groins take flight It was Dad's Chevy's best years by far

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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2025 8:27:00 AM
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Congratulations Connie! :)
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 7/14/2025 2:01:00 PM
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Linda, Thank You
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 7/14/2025 5:37:00 AM
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Author's notes-What excites me about this poem (and I think it gets unnoticed is line 2). I write ... to gaze a star, which is an example of -jux·ta·po·si·tion because it can refer to gaze at a star (the twinkling ones in the sky, or dad's car, or, oh, oh, other.)??
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/13/2025 2:38:00 PM
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Connie, congratulation on your winning placement with your clever and funny limerick.
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 7/14/2025 5:27:00 AM
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Tania, Thank you
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/13/2025 12:11:00 PM
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Oh the teen years... so many"dad cars" being seasoned lol. Xo
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 7/14/2025 5:28:00 AM
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Crystol, Thank you
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/10/2025 10:21:00 AM
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haha. What a great ending!
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 7/10/2025 12:53:00 PM
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Andrea, your comment is very uplifting. Those days brought back a lot a good memories.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/4/2025 10:10:00 PM
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Oh dear!! That sure took me for a ride! Good one, Connie. Steamy windows, eh? ;) Thanks for your visit and kind words.
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 7/5/2025 12:05:00 PM
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Eileen, ty for your visit and comment. It's well received.

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