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Daddy Never Comes

Four year old girl at window seat Pressing her face up against the cold glass A December day, almost Christmas She waits for her Daddy The favorite person in her life Five o’clock, the best time of day for her There is no explanation but Daddy never arrives The girl waits every day at the window, hoping. The mother in her grief, has forgotten she has a daughter A drunk driver has taken the light from their world Still the girl waits, hopeful, every day, never giving up like her mother.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/13/2019 3:02:00 AM
Tragically beautiful writing dear, Caren. I have been through that, only it was cancer who took my parents when I was a child.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/13/2019 6:45:00 AM
I am sorry that happened to you my friend!
Date: 12/12/2019 11:54:00 PM
Heart touching poem
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/13/2019 6:45:00 AM
I completely true story.
Date: 12/12/2019 9:40:00 AM
The image of the girl waiting for her daddy to come is sad... Poet, you did justice to the subject well..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 10:11:00 AM
This happened to a friend of mine in the 1920's. She never got over it.
Date: 12/12/2019 8:26:00 AM
Heart wrenching, Caren. Well penned.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 12/12/2019 4:04:00 AM
Sad poem Caren. they miss him so much. Thanks for sharing this
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 10:12:00 AM
My pleasure.

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