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Daddy Eyes

Daddy’s hazel eyes accuse me of mischief Faeries show me no hint of Mommy. Her hair is naturally curly. Mine is straight and coarse. Possible glints of Grandma’s hurt look peer at me. She always looked like she had just been beaten I peek closer, trying to see into the soul of this face. She appears much older than I think is possible. White hair growing at the roots taunts me Skunk-hair actually, showing me Daddy’s eyes. I stick out my tongue, Full Daddy now. Written 11-22-2019 Contest: The Metaphor of your Face Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 11/24/2019 6:34:00 PM
A cute piece, cleverly penned.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/24/2019 11:47:00 PM
Thank you. All I had to do was look into a mirror.
Date: 11/23/2019 7:30:00 PM
Amazing ending to this poem. Here's to a winner! :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/23/2019 10:48:00 PM
Thank you GW. I have my DADDY's face. There is no denying it.

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