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Dad, You Suffered Me

Dad, You Suffered Me


You looked to the North
I stared to the West
My desire gone forth
I thus failed your test.

"My eyes are not blind,
"and ideas quite alright."
I turned from behind
led by leisure's light!!

          *

Wastrel of fast renown
my purse grew so slim
A beggar had I grown
whose mirth turned dim.

Reason poured forth
homeward to then retire
When I looked North
I saw grey face of sire!

          *

I shivered with regret
doubting Dad's welcome
Yet, the stage was set
to get me back home!

Royalty was in Town
as fanfare lit the day
While in rugs of a Clown
I toddled on the way!

          *

Standing 'fore the table
Dad, all old and wan
To address the Rabble
lavished in dazzling fun:

One sheep in the cold
sin had tainted so black
Being alive in the fold
welcome my Son back!

          *

Such is the Sinner Me
with a hard, rigid dome
Light shall I not see
flicker to go back Home;

Before my Dad's knee
to bow, to plead to say:
For long you suffer'd me
ne'er more shall I stray!


02nd Oct' 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/19/2013 3:47:00 PM
Yes, we are so blessed to have a Dad who welcomes back home, whatever we did! You wrote very poignant verses depicting how old and tired they become, because of their duties. But love will always be there, awaiting us... How poignant! Very beautiful poem, dear Joseph! Thanks for sharing! Blessings, Hanitra
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Joseph Matose
Date: 10/21/2013 6:49:00 AM
Hanitra!!!! I've relished and revelled in your comments beyond commenting...Thank you so much. Thanking you will never be enough though...Friend, JM
Date: 10/2/2013 5:22:00 PM
The one who has seen HIS light impossible it is for him not to find the way! Very well done!
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Date: 10/3/2013 12:08:00 AM
Thanks DT. We need to remember Home! JM

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