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Sadness has fallen upon us all Our hearts grieve as our tears fall Everything has darkened as the clouds fill the sky Many questions asked.The main one why? As days pass,time can only heal. Memories we share,emotions we feel. Now blind to the eyes but still i see The sun shines bright as you look down on me And,as the night comes i know where you are. Ill look up above the brightest star. You've given me strength, you've given me love. What better place to be but with God up above. Goodbye for now but not forever Because one day dad we will all be together. Scott Ede

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/25/2024 7:09:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/27/2016 10:56:00 PM
scott, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
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Date: 12/9/2015 9:05:00 AM
You have penned a wonderful tribute to your Dad, and though it's sad, this poem is a gem. Wishing you many more.
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Date: 11/23/2015 12:12:00 PM
- A great "Dad" poem, I look forward to become more familiar with your poems in the future - Welcome to "The soup", Scott - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:39:00 PM
Hi Scott, this is such an excellent first posting - sad but lovely tribute to your Dad! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/20/2015 3:00:00 AM
Hi Scott, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/19/2015 11:27:00 PM
A heartfelt write Scott, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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