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Cycles

today begins New Sun-rays spread to everyone Skies changing to flowing water... lives move Souls touch alive forever alive touch Souls move lives ...water flowing to changing skies everyone to spread Sun-rays New begins today ** July 19, 2010 for Jared's Palindrome contest :)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2013 2:41:00 PM

dear nikko, good to hear from you. I had such a bad beginning to this day. My phone was not charged and I had a blow out on the freeway. And did I tell you about the 3,600 dollar repair we had done to joe's new used truck? So many things bad keep happening. It's really difficult to stay positive. well,I am gonna get my car now and take it to the tire shop.Thankfully a nice mexican man put the spare on for me so I could drive it. Hope you are well. miss you.Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2010 11:51:00 PM

ok, Nikko. I got it. He is blocked. YOu know, there are some pretty awful people that I have not even blocked, But stupidity I HAVE to block. hahaha. see ya, Luv, andrea ps I have to tell you something. soupmail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2010 12:13:00 PM

well, here is something I can comment on. A congratulations to welcome to the Hm club. haha. there were sure lots of good competitors in this one. Didn't ya think so? Luv ya, Nikko!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/21/2010 1:28:00 PM

Congrats Nikko on your HM in Jared's contest for the Palindrome... enjoy another honor sweet friend for another awesome write.. with luv..

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 7/21/2010 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win too :) You chose a perfect subject and title for the form ~ Sharon :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2010 7:09:00 AM

Congratulations Nikko on your win in Jared Pickett's contest "The Palindrone". Love,Carol

Nick Bagnall

Date: 7/21/2010 4:42:00 AM

Well done, I enjoyed you palindrome

John Freeman

Date: 7/20/2010 11:08:00 PM

Congratulation Nikko, on your hm, Agape, Moses

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/20/2010 4:19:00 AM

well agreed with everyone,, Nikko, i to love the way you phrased it here.. Everyday is a new cycle, Oue lifes and the world are revolve around them, cycles,,cool one, and the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/19/2010 6:34:00 AM

Wish you best of luck with this well written poem in Jared's contest! will send you soon another recipe! Lahat ng mga pinakamahusay at isang magandang linggo! Gert:)

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 7/19/2010 1:13:00 AM

Nice palindrome Nikko, your clever choice of subject and title suits the form perfectly. Good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 7/18/2010 9:35:00 PM

Nikko, I certainly like the way you've parsed this one out. I have had a difficult time trying to write one of these...and have not been satisfied with any of them. Whereas, you have done it magnificently! Good luck in the contest! Dan C

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/18/2010 12:17:00 PM

Very good write, loved the words and the flow. Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2010 11:03:00 AM

well, I am rushing out the door. late for church. grrrr. But anyway, I think this will do well, sweetie. thanks for your much support and your kind words today. And hey, that poem you liked of mine. I won a place with it. WHEEEE. LUv, Andrea