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Cute Black Bear

Cute black bear has a perfect behind
and her manicured paws are so kind
When she sits on a chair
all the male bears just stare  - 
her sheer beauty, it just blows their mind!

A friend has given me a little black bear as a replacement for the soft toy we used to have in my husband’s car – I hope she lasts as long as our old ‘guard dog’!

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Jack Horne

May 23, 2017 at 4:14 PM

ha ha, love this sweet one x

Jan Allison

May 23, 2017 at 5:43 PM

We will never be able to replace the original soft toy - he is wrapped in muslin in the glove box of the car - we have several new soft toys but cream puff is sorely missed. i did find one on the web recently but the seller wanted an awful lot of money and with postage it would have been about £50 so we are just keeping our memories - its so odd that my hubby especially was so attached to this toy which I'd had since my school days and he adopted him for his car - what are we like lol:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

May 18, 2017 at 11:36 AM

These soft toys are sheer delight, Jan...so is your Limerick:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

May 20, 2017 at 12:06 PM

Thanks Paul:-) I now have a 'zoo' of soft toys in my car as we have tried to find a replacement for cream puff - I did find one on the internet but with P & P it would have been over £50 so we have black bear and a robin I have called 'victor' after victor Buhagiar's avatar:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

May 16, 2017 at 10:45 AM

Hi Jan, a lovely little Limerick you place before us. It looks just about as cuddly as me. I think i have a little more padding though, DIET TIME!!!! It gave me smiles this afternoon. S definite fave Jan. Love the Limericks. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison

May 16, 2017 at 12:25 PM

Aww mike your comment made me smile I will think of you as a cuddly bear now !:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats

May 16, 2017 at 9:32 AM

The queen of pooetry soup//has a new bear that won't even poop//just sits and stares//at stares from bears//her beauty knocks 'em for loop. fuzzyhugs ~ j

Jan Allison

May 16, 2017 at 12:26 PM

ha ha ha gee I'm glad it's not a real poopin bear lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

May 16, 2017 at 6:04 AM

Looks like a bear hug is in order...Nice limerick Jan

Jan Allison

May 16, 2017 at 12:26 PM

Definitely Jospeh! I love that comment:-) hugs Jan xx

John Michaels

May 16, 2017 at 2:36 AM

Sweet little limerick about a cute bear!! Think you're going to have to keep an eye on her re: the males... unless you want lots of baby bears on your hands!!! :) Regards, John.

Jan Allison

May 16, 2017 at 12:27 PM

I will make sure Honey bear behaves John!:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

May 15, 2017 at 6:38 PM

Very sweet Jan

Jan Allison

May 16, 2017 at 12:27 PM

aww thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Pettit

May 15, 2017 at 5:27 PM

A cute poem about a cute black bear.

Jan Allison

May 15, 2017 at 5:50 PM

Thanks Robert so lovely to see you back on soup I remember you were one of the first poets I interacted with when I joined soup in 2014:-) hugs jan xx

Eye Truth-Teller

May 15, 2017 at 4:34 PM

haha So good poet

Jan Allison

May 15, 2017 at 5:49 PM

Thank you so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

May 15, 2017 at 1:46 PM

We have black bears in Honey Island Swamp..not too far from New Orleans. They are cute, and yours sounds like a little diva. I think you should give her a name. Nice writing, Jan.

Jan Allison

May 15, 2017 at 2:55 PM

:-) I'm so glad you approve:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

May 15, 2017 at 2:27 PM

That name is perfect. I love it.

Jan Allison

May 15, 2017 at 2:11 PM

oh wow Lin that sounds awesome - we don't have any bears on our little Island so a cuddly teddy bear is the closest I will get! having read your comment I will call my little bear Honey:-) hugs Jan xx

Phillip Garcia

May 15, 2017 at 10:51 AM

Your "friend" gave you a replacement "toy" that you then personified as a cute young mammal in a limerick? Tsk tsk, Jan. Poetry Soup is supposed to be family friendly.

Jan Allison

May 15, 2017 at 11:41 AM

Hey give a girl a break and allow me to us a little poetic licence lol (I think mine is very close to not being renewed for violation to endangered species lol) :-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

May 15, 2017 at 10:01 AM

Very cute Jan. I remember the other poem about the stuffed animal was in your car for a very long time. here's hoping this bear hangs around a long.

Jan Allison

May 15, 2017 at 11:43 AM

Yes I had the original cream puff dog for about 40 years now he is wrapped in muslim and lives in the glove box of my hubbies car! :-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

May 15, 2017 at 9:50 AM

Very cute, Jan :)

Jan Allison

May 15, 2017 at 11:43 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman

May 15, 2017 at 9:28 AM

Adorable witty write and picture Jan; love teddy bears too!~hugs Che :) PS~Hope she'll be a long lasting guard bear too!

Jan Allison

May 15, 2017 at 9:34 AM

I had the other toy from a school friend and my hubby had it as a 'guard dog' until the ravages of old age took their toll and it is irreparable - it is tied up in muslin in the glove box now as hubby couldn't bare to throw it away!:-) hugs Jan xx

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