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Cute black bear has a perfect behind and her manicured paws are so kind When she sits on a chair all the male bears just stare - her sheer beauty, it just blows their mind! A friend has given me a little black bear as a replacement for the soft toy we used to have in my husband’s car – I hope she lasts as long as our old ‘guard dog’! https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/farewell_old_friend_888761 05~15~17

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Date: 5/23/2017 4:14:00 PM
ha ha, love this sweet one x
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/23/2017 5:43:00 PM
We will never be able to replace the original soft toy - he is wrapped in muslin in the glove box of the car - we have several new soft toys but cream puff is sorely missed. i did find one on the web recently but the seller wanted an awful lot of money and with postage it would have been about £50 so we are just keeping our memories - its so odd that my hubby especially was so attached to this toy which I'd had since my school days and he adopted him for his car - what are we like lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/18/2017 6:40:00 PM
Hi Jan , lovely happy Limerick very enjoyable :))) hugs
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Date: 5/20/2017 12:07:00 PM
Thanks Niall:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/18/2017 11:36:00 AM
These soft toys are sheer delight, Jan...so is your Limerick:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/20/2017 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Paul:-) I now have a 'zoo' of soft toys in my car as we have tried to find a replacement for cream puff - I did find one on the internet but with P & P it would have been over £50 so we have black bear and a robin I have called 'victor' after victor Buhagiar's avatar:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/16/2017 10:45:00 AM
Hi Jan, a lovely little Limerick you place before us. It looks just about as cuddly as me. I think i have a little more padding though, DIET TIME!!!! It gave me smiles this afternoon. S definite fave Jan. Love the Limericks. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/16/2017 12:25:00 PM
Aww mike your comment made me smile I will think of you as a cuddly bear now !:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/16/2017 9:32:00 AM
The queen of pooetry soup//has a new bear that won't even poop//just sits and stares//at stares from bears//her beauty knocks 'em for loop. fuzzyhugs ~ j
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Date: 5/16/2017 12:26:00 PM
ha ha ha gee I'm glad it's not a real poopin bear lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/16/2017 6:04:00 AM
Looks like a bear hug is in order...Nice limerick Jan
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Date: 5/16/2017 12:26:00 PM
Definitely Jospeh! I love that comment:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/16/2017 2:36:00 AM
Sweet little limerick about a cute bear!! Think you're going to have to keep an eye on her re: the males... unless you want lots of baby bears on your hands!!! :) Regards, John.
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Date: 5/16/2017 12:27:00 PM
I will make sure Honey bear behaves John!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/15/2017 6:38:00 PM
Very sweet Jan
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Date: 5/16/2017 12:27:00 PM
aww thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/15/2017 5:27:00 PM
A cute poem about a cute black bear.
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Date: 5/15/2017 5:50:00 PM
Thanks Robert so lovely to see you back on soup I remember you were one of the first poets I interacted with when I joined soup in 2014:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/15/2017 4:34:00 PM
haha So good poet
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Date: 5/15/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thank you so much:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/15/2017 1:46:00 PM
We have black bears in Honey Island Swamp..not too far from New Orleans. They are cute, and yours sounds like a little diva. I think you should give her a name. Nice writing, Jan.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/15/2017 2:55:00 PM
:-) I'm so glad you approve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/15/2017 2:27:00 PM
That name is perfect. I love it.
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Date: 5/15/2017 2:11:00 PM
oh wow Lin that sounds awesome - we don't have any bears on our little Island so a cuddly teddy bear is the closest I will get! having read your comment I will call my little bear Honey:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/15/2017 10:51:00 AM
Your "friend" gave you a replacement "toy" that you then personified as a cute young mammal in a limerick? Tsk tsk, Jan. Poetry Soup is supposed to be family friendly.
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Date: 5/15/2017 11:41:00 AM
Hey give a girl a break and allow me to us a little poetic licence lol (I think mine is very close to not being renewed for violation to endangered species lol) :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/15/2017 10:01:00 AM
Very cute Jan. I remember the other poem about the stuffed animal was in your car for a very long time. here's hoping this bear hangs around a long.
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Date: 5/15/2017 11:43:00 AM
Yes I had the original cream puff dog for about 40 years now he is wrapped in muslim and lives in the glove box of my hubbies car! :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/15/2017 9:50:00 AM
Very cute, Jan :)
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Date: 5/15/2017 11:43:00 AM
Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/15/2017 9:28:00 AM
Adorable witty write and picture Jan; love teddy bears too!~hugs Che :) PS~Hope she'll be a long lasting guard bear too!
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Date: 5/15/2017 9:34:00 AM
I had the other toy from a school friend and my hubby had it as a 'guard dog' until the ravages of old age took their toll and it is irreparable - it is tied up in muslin in the glove box now as hubby couldn't bare to throw it away!:-) hugs Jan xx