Custodian of Tradition

My son Jacob, he follows traditions
  Religious, he has certain ambitions

    He prays to God three times a day
    I think he even knows what to say

  Straight as an arrow, and square as a box
  Jacob took a liking to bagels and lox

    Sister snitched: Jacob prays right before he eats
     ~ that I don't slip a slice of pork in his daily treat

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Date: 9/18/2023 6:56:00 PM
Too funny! The straightlaced son baited by his mischievous sis!
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Date: 9/18/2023 3:46:00 AM
It is good that your son does try to apply the food restrictions of his faith to his life. It possibly will help him live longer. Be proud of a son who wants to do what is taught to him that is right and not do evil because there is so much of the evil in the world today. Sara
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/18/2023 6:38:00 PM
Very proud of my Jacob.
Date: 9/17/2023 9:18:00 PM
It's a blessing to have such a son. I feel a curious liking for your Jacob. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/18/2023 6:37:00 PM
He's still single, Valsa. But he will not even talk to a married woman! lol. ~ gw
Date: 9/17/2023 10:01:00 AM
You naughty boy, you! You wouldn't, would you? smiles, :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2023 7:26:00 PM
Who me? Naaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh.
Date: 9/16/2023 12:19:00 PM
You my friend have a son to be most proud of. Great short poem. I love the funny part. God bless you.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2023 7:28:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comment, Robert. Blessings, gw
Date: 9/16/2023 8:09:00 AM
“To treff or not to treff,,,,that is the question!” Fun Knees, Pangie x x
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2023 7:29:00 PM
Heh-heh. Cute comment, P! Thanks!
Date: 9/16/2023 4:12:00 AM
Made me smile!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2023 7:33:00 PM
Keep smiling, Terry. Light and levity, Gershon
Date: 9/15/2023 8:52:00 PM
No pork on this young man's fork. Rabbi's may talk , Or baulk. I Like this couplet and bagels too.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2023 7:38:00 PM
Ha, ha! Love your comment, Shirley! Make mine ham and cheese, with a side of shrimp. ~ Ex-Rabbi
Date: 9/15/2023 8:53:00 AM
Just don't step on the apple.....it seems it didn't fall far from the tree......
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2023 7:41:00 PM
Drats. Stepped on the snake instead.
Date: 9/14/2023 9:27:00 PM
Cute share, Gershon. I had to smile a couple of times, but it sounds like a son to be proud of dad. Thanks for sharing. Bill
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2023 7:41:00 PM
Keep smiling, Bill!
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