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Cupid's Arrow

He takes aim and draws the bow The swift arrow unerring Piercing her cold heart with love And watches her melt

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James Foulk

Date: 6/22/2011 2:40:00 PM

really liked this one Jack a wonderful piece of poetry.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/22/2011 6:15:00 AM

Wonderful write here jack!Congrats on your win---kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/21/2011 11:02:00 AM

Congratulations to you Jack for your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Winged Cupid". Love, Carol

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/21/2011 8:19:00 AM

A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your third place win. Caryl

Elaine George

Date: 3/21/2011 7:41:00 AM

LOVE THIS ONE, JACK. GREAT DODOITSU. many congrat's on your WIN. Elaine

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/21/2011 6:11:00 AM

Hey Jack, loved coming back to this one, congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest ;)

John Freeman

Date: 3/20/2011 9:05:00 PM

Good to see you at the top Jack. Congratulations with this worthy honored third place. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2011 3:18:00 PM

Very nice. And a big congratulations to you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/20/2011 3:17:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your wonderful success in the Cupid contest.. wonderful words my friend to earn u a top spot for a top notch entry luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2011 3:11:00 PM

So happy to see you ranking high in the contest with this poem, Jack. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/20/2011 2:58:00 PM

Congrats my friend on your win

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/20/2011 2:41:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, jack

Kash Poet

Date: 3/20/2011 1:04:00 PM

Excellent write Jack!Goodluck in the contest--kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2011 11:15:00 PM

Ahhh, very nice!!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/16/2011 12:59:00 PM

Soup mail returned, Jack

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/16/2011 11:59:00 AM

Jack I love your entry for Dr. Ram's contest, must be pure joy to witness her melt.. Wishing you all the best for Dr. Ram's contest :)

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/15/2011 6:06:00 PM

love it, best of luck in the contest

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2011 2:40:00 PM

Such a romantic take, Jack. When I see Cupid, I run and hide. LOL That way I avoid the meltdowns. I guess I better hurry and post my entry. It looks like this contest will fill quickly! Wishing you success, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/15/2011 2:01:00 PM

Thanks for participating in my contest, Jack