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Didactic/Epulaeryu Form

Gritty flour mixed with eggs Milk and thick honey Beat to silky ribbons-cook Sweetened creamed butter Creates smooth icing Spiced mushrooms Sweet! 09/25/15

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Skat A

Date: 10/14/2015 9:58:00 PM

mmmmm, Sweet but the mushrooms are a little too much... Congrats. SKAT

Julia Ward

Date: 10/13/2015 3:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, James!

James Inman
Date: 10/13/2015 9:07:00 AM

Thank you Julia

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/12/2015 5:03:00 AM

Congrats on a wonderful win James!

James Inman
Date: 10/12/2015 7:58:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Sharma.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/10/2015 10:23:00 PM

James nice win my friend. The spiced mushrooms was a nice addition.

James Inman
Date: 10/12/2015 7:58:00 AM

Thanks, Michael.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2015 12:51:00 PM

Glad this one won. I am so mad at myself for not making the deadline on this one. Yay for you, my good friend!!

James Inman
Date: 10/10/2015 2:00:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Tammy Reams

Date: 10/10/2015 11:12:00 AM

Congrats on your win James! Mushrooms and yes I got it! Thank you for entering into my contest.

James Inman
Date: 10/10/2015 11:45:00 AM

Tammy, thank you so much and thanks for hosting the contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2015 7:32:00 AM

I'm not a great cupcake fan but I do make them occassionally and I loved your poem - congrats:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman
Date: 10/10/2015 9:37:00 AM

Jan, thanks for the nice comment. I was trying a new form and it did not turn out quite the way I wanted, too vague.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2015 5:11:00 PM

I liked this till I got to the last words. I had to read the others' comments to get it. hahaha

James Inman
Date: 9/27/2015 7:31:00 PM

Yeah, Andrea, I know. I was trying a new form, Epulaeryu (Didactic because it teaches). It seemed to fit for the contest but I used too vague of a reference for my three syllable line.

Constance La France

Date: 9/26/2015 2:40:00 PM

James, oh I get it they look like mushrooms, clever word play, I love cupcakes, my waist however does not, best of luck in the contest, and thanks for visiting my poem, cracked and fragmented and that's 4 poems fragmented....

James Inman
Date: 9/27/2015 7:35:00 PM

Thank you BW. I'm afraid not my best.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/26/2015 1:16:00 AM

OH!!! I didn't get the spiced mushroom bit till I read Mark's post. Silly me. I'm a little dense. ;) Lovely poem...sounds...yummy. Good luck in the contest.

James Inman
Date: 9/27/2015 7:05:00 PM

Your are not silly at all, too vague of a reference it seems. Thanks Eileen.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/25/2015 10:16:00 PM

Nice recipe I'm going to write it down, excellent write James.

James Inman
Date: 9/27/2015 7:04:00 PM

Thanks Michael.

Mark Woods

Date: 9/25/2015 7:24:00 PM

I had to think about the spiced mushrooms, then I thought what a wonderful description. Good luck in the contest.

James Inman
Date: 9/25/2015 9:10:00 PM

Thanks Mark.