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Crystals In the Sand

Crystals in the Sand Walking and seeing a lonely man Sitting so forlorn and so out there alone A woman is stuck so inside a memory Watching the storm so idle-less and less As it’s bringing down an endless rain From tears of yesterday of year. He hides behind an unknown pain Pondering why it’ll always be the same Here in life’s smallest of game Does anyone ever have to play? As he endlessly cries out her name. As he thinks like there’s no more love to give When his first real love left in past time Still she holds it all in the palm of her hand Like the all elusive Crystals in the Sand. He thinks of only one simple reason That only wants to make him alive As time changes within every season He tries, to hold his head high, high. Knowing he somehow has to give it a try Like the pounding hammer upon a stone When he thinks every angel has to fly Fly on home to his home of so long ago. I may just meet up with you again, Now he sees the setting of the sun A wonderment of a face can be a beautiful one Shining like a multicolored rainbow in the sky. As he knows her love will never die Even though now she’s gone, gone, gone Her love keeps him moving on Like the all elusive Crystals in the sand. 05/06/2015

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Date: 5/9/2016 6:02:00 AM
A deep piece indeed... Congrats Theresa, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/8/2016 9:17:00 PM
congrats on your win with this emotional and well done poem
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Date: 5/8/2016 6:15:00 PM
Theresa Congrats on your awesome win! Stop by my latest blog "Making A Difference." Enjoy and celebrate this win. With Love **SKAT**
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Date: 11/17/2015 4:04:00 PM
The name Theresa Marie seems familiar to me!! I have to leave work now and need to do a few more comments, but i Hope to come back to this one and savor it later!!
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Date: 11/21/2015 7:34:00 PM
I'm so very glad you came to my first poem I submitted to poetry soup this time around, when I left a while back. this poem I had submitted when i was last here. I enjoy writing funny things most people who know me they all say I have a weird sense of humor and I really think I do have dry humor.... haha Take care Sweet Andrea.... Huggs Theresa
Date: 6/23/2015 1:14:00 PM
Theresa, it's not possible to read this poem and not be moved by it. The imagery "Crystals in the Sand," which you sustain throughout, is emotionally powerful and makes the poem the remarkable composition that it is, particularly in the concluding line. Wonderful!
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Date: 6/23/2015 10:45:00 PM
Thank you so very much Paul for your beautiful comment on this penned poem of mine. Took me quite awhile to write this one...I value your statement profoundly, thanks again...
Date: 6/12/2015 1:34:00 AM
Theresa, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/23/2015 10:47:00 PM
Sorry for not answering back any sooner. Get so busy doing, working and dealing with everyday life. Thank you very much for your beautiful comment and congratulating me.... Love, light and live--Theresa
Date: 6/4/2015 11:30:00 PM
Theresa, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/23/2015 10:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Linda for welcoming me to poetry soup. Sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you. Been so busy these days working, sometimes I don't even know when I can even get a descent nights sleep. Hopefully all is going real well with you... Hugs Theresa
Date: 5/31/2015 6:35:00 PM
This poetic trip though the heart is, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem. Emile.
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Date: 5/31/2015 10:46:00 PM
Thank you so very much Emile for your beautiful and creative comment on this penned poem of mine. Theresa
Date: 5/31/2015 7:39:00 AM
Theresa , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 5/31/2015 10:41:00 PM
Thank you very much Skat for your beautiful welcoming message. Hugs friend * Theresa*
Date: 5/31/2015 4:51:00 AM
I found the imagery so so moving Theresa it made me feel quite emotional:-( Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 5/31/2015 10:39:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan for your beautiful comment on this penned poem of mine. Hugs Theresa

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