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Crystal River

Flowing along the mystic River Up in the hills, sits chills and shiver Trees and flowers grow and bloom Along the reflecting crystal river ........................................... 17.04.011 written in the form of rubiyat.. ...........................................

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/28/2011 6:43:00 PM

Congrats Azim on you success with this beautiful rubiyat..BG

Azim Mohammed
Date: 5/15/2011 10:51:00 PM

Dear barbara, Thank you for lovely comment for my poem and appreciate your warm encouragement Have a wonderful day Regards

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2011 4:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Azim Mohammed
Date: 5/15/2011 10:54:00 PM

Dear sara, Thank you for encouraging comment for my poem and appreciate it very much Have pleasant time Regards

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/27/2011 10:39:00 AM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, azim

Azim Mohammed
Date: 5/15/2011 10:55:00 PM

Dear Dr. Ram Thank you for lovely comment for my poem and appreciate your warm encouragement Have a wonderful day Regards

John Freeman

Date: 4/27/2011 8:37:00 AM

Great to see your success in the top ten with this great poem Azim. Congratulations on your special entry's grace. Agape, Moses

Azim Mohammed
Date: 5/15/2011 10:56:00 PM

Dear John, Its so encouraging to have such readers, and thank you for your valuable time and comments have nice time regards azim

Azim Mohammed

Date: 4/26/2011 9:48:00 PM

Thank you all for encouraging me and commenting on my poetry. its my honour to have make this far.. wishing you all a lovelt time regards azim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/26/2011 4:06:00 PM

Beautiful rubaiyat, Azim. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Azim Mohammed
Date: 5/15/2011 10:58:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn, for encouraging, have a lovely time regards azim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/26/2011 12:36:00 PM

Congratulations Azim on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol

Azim Mohammed
Date: 5/15/2011 10:59:00 PM

Thank you for encouraging comment for my poem and appreciate it very much Have wonderful time Regards azim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/26/2011 12:33:00 PM

Congrats Azim on your wonderful winning poem in John's contest using the new form so well.. enjoy your top ten victory with luv..

James Fraser

Date: 4/26/2011 12:16:00 PM

Many congratulations on your sixth place win Azim (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles

Azim Mohammed
Date: 5/15/2011 10:57:00 PM

Thank you for encouraging comment James, have a nice time regards

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 4/26/2011 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations on 6th place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl

Azim Mohammed
Date: 5/15/2011 10:58:00 PM

dear carly Thank you for lovely comment for my poem and appreciate your warm encouragement Have a wonderful day Regards

Elaine George

Date: 4/26/2011 11:16:00 AM

Beautiful, Azim. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie

Azim Mohammed
Date: 5/15/2011 10:59:00 PM

Dear Elanie Thank you for encouraging comment for my poem and appreciate it very much Have nice time Regards

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/17/2011 1:25:00 PM

beautiful and lovely imagery, azim