Azim Mohammed Poet Rubaiyat

Crystal River

Flowing along the mystic River
Up in the hills, sits chills and shiver
Trees and flowers grow and bloom
Along the reflecting crystal river 
 
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written in the form of rubiyat..
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Barbara Gorelick April 28, 2011 at 6:43 PM Congrats Azim on you success with this beautiful rubiyat..BG Azim Mohammed May 15, 2011 at 10:51 PM Dear barbara, Thank you for lovely comment for my poem and appreciate your warm encouragement Have a wonderful day Regards

Sara Kendrick April 27, 2011 at 4:23 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Azim Mohammed May 15, 2011 at 10:54 PM Dear sara, Thank you for encouraging comment for my poem and appreciate it very much Have pleasant time Regards

Dr.Ram Mehta April 27, 2011 at 10:39 AM Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, azim Azim Mohammed May 15, 2011 at 10:55 PM Dear Dr. Ram Thank you for lovely comment for my poem and appreciate your warm encouragement Have a wonderful day Regards

John Freeman April 27, 2011 at 8:37 AM Great to see your success in the top ten with this great poem Azim. Congratulations on your special entry's grace. Agape, Moses Azim Mohammed May 15, 2011 at 10:56 PM Dear John, Its so encouraging to have such readers, and thank you for your valuable time and comments have nice time regards azim

Azim Mohammed April 26, 2011 at 9:48 PM Thank you all for encouraging me and commenting on my poetry. its my honour to have make this far.. wishing you all a lovelt time regards azim

Carolyn Devonshire April 26, 2011 at 4:06 PM Beautiful rubaiyat, Azim. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn Azim Mohammed May 15, 2011 at 10:58 PM Thank you Carolyn, for encouraging, have a lovely time regards azim

Carol Sunshine Brown April 26, 2011 at 12:36 PM Congratulations Azim on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol Azim Mohammed May 15, 2011 at 10:59 PM Thank you for encouraging comment for my poem and appreciate it very much Have wonderful time Regards azim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 26, 2011 at 12:33 PM Congrats Azim on your wonderful winning poem in John's contest using the new form so well.. enjoy your top ten victory with luv..

James Fraser April 26, 2011 at 12:16 PM Many congratulations on your sixth place win Azim (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles Azim Mohammed May 15, 2011 at 10:57 PM Thank you for encouraging comment James, have a nice time regards

Caryl Muzzey April 26, 2011 at 11:24 AM Congratulations on 6th place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl Azim Mohammed May 15, 2011 at 10:58 PM dear carly Thank you for lovely comment for my poem and appreciate your warm encouragement Have a wonderful day Regards

Elaine George April 26, 2011 at 11:16 AM Beautiful, Azim. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie Azim Mohammed May 15, 2011 at 10:59 PM Dear Elanie Thank you for encouraging comment for my poem and appreciate it very much Have nice time Regards

Dr.Ram Mehta April 17, 2011 at 1:25 PM beautiful and lovely imagery, azim