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Cry Me a River

two things i've given my heart to
two things for which i've cried
my dear dear love april
and my little dog that died
tears are sometimes expected
but really somewhat a surprise
the secret of how much you love someone
are hidden in the eye's

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Debbie Duncan Date: 9/29/2012 4:33:00 PM love it ,,,, the eyes have it,,, you have an awesome weekend ;} Login to Reply

Dawn Mclaughlin Date: 9/24/2012 2:23:00 PM Oh i know the eyes are the answers..Thank you for the lovely visit xx Dawn x Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/6/2012 10:58:00 PM Yes its all in the eyes even when we don't utter a word John.. Very sentimental... and i love that song.. Hope you are fine my good friend... ChaRMA Login to Reply

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/17/2012 8:58:00 AM Tears don't lie...this is a heartfelt write here!! Login to Reply

Terry L. Allen Date: 5/29/2012 3:42:00 PM Yes the eyes are loves meter if you know how to read them in states other than just full blown love. What really hurts is when they show you that love is dieing and the mouth won't tell you why. Huggs TLee Login to Reply Date: 5/30/2012 7:04:00 AM I loved this comment.

Lisa Cooper Date: 5/28/2012 4:08:00 PM very true Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 5/22/2012 5:26:00 PM well written,,,, we've all lost a pet or two,,,,, thank you for reading my "KHAN" you have a great & blessed day ;} Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/9/2012 2:40:00 PM Sweet friend, you have had so many struggles in the past year and are always in my prayers. I still have that photo of you with the dog. Very provocative last two lines. Gives us a lot to ponder. Beautiful write, John! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply John Loving Iii Date: 5/12/2012 6:44:00 PM carolyn! you do have a picture of me with my dog! i forgot that! and yes, thats the dog.

Phyllis Babcock Date: 4/27/2012 1:24:00 PM We often hide things behind our eyes. Very well put on this poem. Hope you have a great day. love phyl Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 4/20/2012 7:37:00 AM Hi John, such a hurt in this, it is very painful to lose what you love and sometimes it feels like healing is so far away. Also I've found replacements are never the same. Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 4/10/2012 4:26:00 PM I have lost my dog as well and know how you feel. Your poem was very emotional and a great write. Hope you had a wonderful Easter Cory Login to Reply

Ivy Vresk Date: 4/10/2012 7:58:00 AM I have lost my dog,and my cat died,and tears are never stopped,the pain you have I know,thank you for sharing your feelings with us,truly Ivy Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/10/2012 6:24:00 AM Yes ..eyes are the mirror of the soul john Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 4/9/2012 4:30:00 AM Smile ˜ Happy Easter John!:) ˜ Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/8/2012 4:54:00 PM Yes, the eyes tell the truth..Enjoyed reading this one..I know that you are still missing April..Has it been a year?...Thanks for the Easter greeting..We celebrated Karter's birthday today..This was his actual birthday..One year old now..Sara Login to Reply

Lisa Cooper Date: 4/8/2012 2:16:00 PM happy Easter right back at ya. Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 4/8/2012 11:45:00 AM John, so sorry I misunderstood your comment. I get confrontational comments from other poets once in a while about my christian beliefs. I try to respond with respect. You are so right, Jesus did prove it Easter morning! Happy Easter to you, Rhonda :) Login to Reply John Loving Iii Date: 4/9/2012 8:27:00 AM now you get it.

Phyllis Babcock Date: 4/8/2012 11:25:00 AM this is so true. My computer is acting funny today so not sure if it is this site. Happy EASTER. love phyl Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 4/8/2012 10:36:00 AM So very true... Login to Reply

Katherine Stella Date: 4/8/2012 9:25:00 AM its so hard when we lose those close to us not only did my mom love her dog but when she died I took care of him now they both are back reuniting I dont think I want another but will love other pets its to darn hard to let go also Hoppy easter sweet man hope it filled with gooeyness today with sweetness only thanks for sharing Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 4/8/2012 9:18:00 AM May God comfort you ad you grieve. These are beautiful heartfelt lines. Thank you for commenting on my Easter poem. As far as proving it, I find I cannot prove something to someone who does not want to believe. If your mind is open to considering it, you may want to read Lee Strobel, A Case for Christ and others. If not, I only ask for respect on this site from you and I will give the same to you. Enjoy your day Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/8/2012 7:58:00 AM so very true are these lines of emotion John.. losing a loved one or a dear pet is so tragic .. no one ever replaces them luv.. but the memories sustain.. thankxx for sharing and Happy Easter blessings to u luv.. Login to Reply