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" Like a fish caught in a cruel net; 
or a bird caught in a trap,  
in the same way a person can be trapped;
by bad things that suddenly happen."
 
Based on Ecclesiastes 9:12
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I have lived life on a collision course, but, I have now come to a turning point; and I have wept tears until I am hoarse. Have been galloping on a magic horse, never stopping at a single checkpoint; I have lived life on a collision course. Have worn bright diamonds and violet quartz, even in youth smoked an illegal joint; and I have wept tears until I am hoarse. But, that is all behind me as time warps, oh, I never wanted to disappoint; I have lived life on a collision course. I have had no way out- no escape source, even gentleness others did exploit; and I have wept tears until I am hoarse. At this juncture, a new me I endorse, my race against time over, I rejoice; I have lived life on a collision course, and I have wept tears until I am hoarse. ______________________________ September 15, 2019 (Re-Post) Poetry/Villanelle/Crossroads of My Life Copyright Protected, ID 19-1217-133-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Your Best 2019-2020, Villanelle sponsor, William Kekaula Seventh Place

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Date: 1/29/2020 11:20:00 PM
Beautiful moving verse, Dear Heart, congratulations on your 7th place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/31/2020 11:38:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 1/29/2020 8:35:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this piece, revealing your victorious life journey. God bless you.
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Date: 1/31/2020 11:38:00 AM
Beata, thanks for the comment and the congrats _Constance
Date: 1/29/2020 6:33:00 PM
Ah, Constance this one speaks to my heart. The last 10 years I have spent charting new courses for my life: health, hobbies, attention to loved ones, living in the moment. You have distilled my decade of discovery into a beautiful Villanelle covered in your poetic fingerprints. Thank you (and congrats!) Hugs ~ John
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2020 11:40:00 AM
John, thanks for the great comment, compliment and congrats,we must always be changing and discovering ourselves _Constance
Date: 1/29/2020 2:35:00 PM
It made me humble, your poem, and delighted with such an entry Constance, my compliments on 7th place and thanks for your participation.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/29/2020 4:35:00 PM
William, thank you so much for the contest and for my great placement, honored _Constance

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